the_war_inside

Salutations my frens!
          	I'm currently rewriting the first chapter, again. I've gotten a lot of good feedback on the current version but I need to change some things so it agrees with the story. It will have most of the same dialogue but some things will be changed. It should be much better and much more interesting. You'll find out a lot more about Jen's character and Kevin's character will be more accurately portrayed. You'll get to meet Lily and some of the people from the village and all in all, it should be a much better introduction to my book. 
          	Thanks so much for reading it! Knowing people are actually interested in my book gives me a lot of motivation to keep at it.

the_war_inside

Salutations my frens!
          I'm currently rewriting the first chapter, again. I've gotten a lot of good feedback on the current version but I need to change some things so it agrees with the story. It will have most of the same dialogue but some things will be changed. It should be much better and much more interesting. You'll find out a lot more about Jen's character and Kevin's character will be more accurately portrayed. You'll get to meet Lily and some of the people from the village and all in all, it should be a much better introduction to my book. 
          Thanks so much for reading it! Knowing people are actually interested in my book gives me a lot of motivation to keep at it.

the_war_inside

Wow, last time I was on here was July. Holy crap. Well, a lot has changed since then, most notably my title. 'They're After Me' to 'The War Inside'. The old title just wasn't working with what I had changed in the book. The new title fits much better with the war that's going on, both with the Marxists and the Patriots and with Jen and herself. I have to thank @/z.ooo.e from IG for the awesome title, it's perfect. 
          So I've revised the prologue a bit and the first chapter is completely new. Please leave feedback, I'd love to hear what you guys think, thanks!!