theagstd

published the refined version, it's not big of a change, i've just edited out the whole scene before the smut since most of ya'll didn't like the idea of it and i realised it wasn't right too. i apologise for my mistake, it wasn't nice to include such an idea. hope ya'll like the updated ver better, let me know xoxo

kookbun013

It’s okay thanks for this amazing story author
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theagstd

@kookbun013 ik but it might've come out wrong especially since they are now in an established relationship... the comments made me realise it was not just jealousy uk :(
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kookbun013

we love the idea before too whole jealousy partt!!
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theagstd

published the refined version, it's not big of a change, i've just edited out the whole scene before the smut since most of ya'll didn't like the idea of it and i realised it wasn't right too. i apologise for my mistake, it wasn't nice to include such an idea. hope ya'll like the updated ver better, let me know xoxo

kookbun013

It’s okay thanks for this amazing story author
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theagstd

@kookbun013 ik but it might've come out wrong especially since they are now in an established relationship... the comments made me realise it was not just jealousy uk :(
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kookbun013

we love the idea before too whole jealousy partt!!
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theagstd

I think the smut part of the chapter was a mistake, I figured it wasn’t the right thing so I’ll be changing that part, hence why I unpublished the chapter for now, I will post it back by tonight with a change of the smut

kookbun013

Means no more smut part? It was good to me like very fulfilling complete but as you wish author
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ilovemybfjungkookkk

Okk
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theagstd

I hope you enjoyed reading my book! Please look forward for more projects by me. Epilogue of ONS wl be written when I reach my personal goal, thanks for all the ONS love, bubs!!!

Vinuuuuu21

Im cryinggggggg can't believe my fav series just endeddddd This was such a beautiful journey Forever greatfull u wrote this masterpiece ✨✨✨✨ much luv authornim
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jeonjya_29

i’m sobbing i don’t want to believe it’s over ☹️, u already know u got us all so in love with ur charming writing style and we’ll be here so ready to give all our love to you, i got to met you on a random tiktok comment abt recommendations and i couldn’t be more grateful abt it, love u min .
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jjkophile

@theagstd what a great journey of roller coaster emotions I've felt reading ONS... it's hard to say goodbye to this beautiful story, keeping it close to the deepest part of my heart..   
            
            **ugghhhhh crying**
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