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@Mr_Aek :)) sure :) 

Oh my god! I'm one of your few fans! *feels proud of self* would you be able to share the story on facebook/fans/friends? I wanna try and see if I can get it up to rank 1 (its at 6 right now) for hotness :)

Pwede pong pakijoin dito sa club: http://www.marapets.com/refer.php?id=Ayban Kelangan lang kasi po ng friend ng mga members. =) Safe po yan, no downloads or chorba. =) Ifa-fan ko po ang magjojoin. :D

"Somebody that i used to know"-  
          First off, the name of this story is not compelling. Honestly the title "Somebody That I Used To Know" Reminds me of the song. It does not suck me in or make me instantly want to read your story. It also makes it sound to cheesy and i know instantly that the story is going to contain a little too much romance than appropriate. 
          Something else that could be improved is the word "SHE" comes up TOO MUCH! It gets quite confusing if you are constantly reading 'she did this', 'she asked him what was wrong', 'she passionatly kissed him'. Its like what? Too confusing. Try and use other words, like her name. 
          The paragraphs are to short; this particularaly annoyed me. They need more detail. Yes, you don't want to read a huge chunk of writing, but you don't need to start a new paragraph after every sentence.
          The plot is good and once impproved, l can see it becoming popular among wattpad readers. 
          -Circlesnsquares and Tayla

Hello! I'm currently reading your work. :)

thx @Musickeepsmesane and @Realli_Sushi for welcoming me :D I have an fb but I decided to separate this from that because I was too shy to post it up where my friends could see it. It is better for me to let strangers judge my work honestly, or so I think :))

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