thearose1988

new book secrets lies murder 
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thearose1988

I need your help share read comment I appreciate it don't be shy readers my writing is not great but knowing your reading by books means so much to me
          thank you
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BibbleOnFire

@ thearose1988  you're welcome<33 thank you for accepting my feedback<33
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thearose1988

@thearose1988 I will be editing the books and thank you for your comments they do help me a lot
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BibbleOnFire

@ thearose1988  I really need to be honest with you about the text. I read the first chapter of the last book you wrote and I’m having a very hard time reading it because the sentences jump around a lot, the dialogue isn’t clear, and there’s no structure that helps me understand who is speaking or what is happening. The spelling and grammar mistakes make it even harder to follow. I’m not trying to be mean, but I just can’t keep reading something when I constantly have to guess the meaning. Your ideas are interesting, but the way it’s written right now makes it confusing and exhausting to get through. If the scenes were clearer, the dialogue organized, and the spelling cleaned up, it would be much easier to follow.
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