Oddity999

Yo, I found my gmail you still want it?

thearshman_

@Oddity999 Hello, really sorry for the delay! I just got it done. Tysm for your patience :)
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Oddity999

@thearshman_ Hello! it's me the writer of Snake War Oddity999! I'm reaching out to ya to ask,  is there a reason why your staying so quite after I gave you my gmail?
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thearshman_

@Oddity999 Aww that’s really sweet of you, thank you for trusting me with it! Don’t worry, I totally understand I’ll make sure to keep it safe and respect your privacy. And haha, no worries if you ever goof up, we all do sometimes! I really appreciate you sharing it though, it honestly means a lot.
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thearshman_

@no1tatertot Haha nooo, don’t worry, I’m definitely not a bot lol. Thank you so much for your advice it honestly helped me more than I can say. The part about giving characters flaws and showing how they feel? Absolute game-changer I feel like I can make my characters so much more real now. I’d love to share a tiny suggestion about your stories, too, just as a reader who’s been really enjoying them!

thearshman_

@no1tatertot Thank you, that honestly means a lot! I’d love to get your thoughts on character development, like I’ve been struggling a bit with my main character. I’m not sure if they come off as realistic enough or just… dramatic lol. When you’re building your characters, how do you make them feel alive instead of just written?