thebookgirl25

Hi everyone,  the last book of 'The Eldest" series is posted and I hope you enjoy it. The whole series will be edited in some time.

4423hee

I finished the Eldest series in the span of 2 days and finished it currently at 3 am in the morning with bloodshot eyes, had it not been for my classes and busy schedule i would have read it in one sitting. I wanted to say I absolutely loved it. The book not only gave so much character to our main characters but also to the original side characters of P&P. Though I admit I don't really have much to say regarding the book since I only watched the movie. The book was headache inducing and has affected my poor nerves as I read through the passage each second. English is not my first language and have thus stopped at reading P&P at the very first chapter. So pardon me if I only based this review through the current media I was able to view which was the P&P movie from 2005.
          
          Anyway that was not the whole point of me writing this message, I just wanted to say that I absolutely loved the Trilogy. Though I admit some of it may have been dramatic for my tastes, however, who doesn't like a little drama in life. The characters felt so real and I absolutely loved every interaction between them. Don't get me wrong though, I love the original P&P, I really wouldn't read some crumbs left from the story if I didn't like it, but I found the book quite lacking regarding the characters. I really don't know how to describe it, I just feel that the leads weren't fleshed out as I like it. I feel as if there wasn't that much depth, be it their character or their interaction. I just feel like I read a book (obviously) or a romance story where the hero sweeps the heroines from impending doom which is being single (obviously).

4423hee

@4423hee That was why I love what you wrote, reading Mr. Darcy's POV gave him so much depth, reading his thoughts with our heroine here, which is Adele, made me want to do a cartwheel in absolute delight. It just made me so giddy. Tbh I never got the hype of Mr. Darcy in the movies or books, but in your writing I had conjured the thoughts of "why her when it should've been me" type of stuff. And I also really loved your heroine in the Trilogy. She was not quick to judge over the circumstances regarding our hero and I absolutely loved their banters and the way you wrote her older which may have not fit given that time period, but I would not like it any other way. I dare say she also inherited her mother's dramatics in handling some situation, and again I quote, who doesn't love a little drama.
            
            I am sorry this may have been quite a wordy message or review whatever you may address this, I only wanted to say I adore your work and I hope you still continue to write dear author. I cannot express how much I really loved it.
            
            PS.
            I also shared that English is not my first language, but I find it really easy to understand what you wrote, there wasn't any over dramatic wordplay or brain juice evaporating sentences which require me to think for more than a minute.
            
            PS. again
            I'm really sorry if you will read this as it is quite lengthy, this is my first time writing a review to any fiction or novel I have read so you can tell there is still excitement here.
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KarolBennet13

Hello, how are you?
          
          I would like to congratulate you on The Eldest series. I truly loved the books and deeply admire the way the story and characters are developed.
          
          I work with book translations and I am also an avid reader of Pride and Prejudice fanfiction, which has given me a strong appreciation for emotionally rich and well-crafted narratives.
          
          With that in mind, I would like to ask if you would consider granting permission for me to translate your series into Portuguese. Of course, this would only be done with your full authorization, and all proper credits would be clearly given to you as the original author, fully respecting your rights.
          
          I would be honored to help bring your work to more readers in Brazil.
          
          Thank you very much for your time, and congratulations again on your wonderful work.
          
          Kind regards,
          Karol Bennet

thebookgirl25

@KarolBennet13  Hi, just wanted to ask if you'd need the original cover for the books??? I still have my drafts, so you can forward me the writing you want on the cover and I can type it out and send it to you somehow???
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thebookgirl25

@KarolBennet13 Sure, I give you my full consent for this. I really am very flattered that you liked it  Thank you so much for doing this!!!
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KarolBennet13

Hi!! I always make it very clear that the work is a translation, give full credit to the author, and dedicate the translation to them. I translate carefully and with a lot of respect for the original story. My goal is only to help your book reach more readers who don’t read English.
            I’ve already translated two books by Willingly (Licorice and Ink | Mr. Darcy and Influence and Grace | Mr. Darcy), which are available on my Wattpad profile if you’d like to take a look.
            I wanted to ask if you would be comfortable with me translating your book into Portuguese so Brazilian readers can enjoy it too.
            Of course, I completely understand if you’d rather not allow it — I just wanted to ask 
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teheakiko

Please update the dukes wallflower :)

teheakiko

Oh yes I’m so sorry ofc. Take your time theres no rush! 
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thebookgirl25

@teheakiko I'd try to update a chapter today but please understand that I am busy with my studies 
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thebookgirl25

@Romanticanvas Hi girl! Thank you! Yeah sure, I can give you some tips. Try to keep the book beside you, it naturally inspires you when you read each chapter and try to mimic the writing by yourself. I am sure you can see I was not very good as it at first, I think it comes from practice, also use AI tool to correct your Austen tone, like using better vocab, it will also start to come a little bit naturally after some time. I think practice is key. I hope this helps 

thebookgirl25

Hello everyone, I just resumed my series and wrote the Prologue for book 3. Hope you find it intriguing and continue to support me. I am truly sorry for not coming up with the story sooner because of my writer's block. But I hope you would love the last part as much as you did the others.
          Sending lots of love and happiness 

Reyesgrace1234132

@thebookgirl25 waiting for more updates 
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