Just Blue 💙

Hey, I'm writing a Filipino BL entitled: Florante and Larry and The Last Days of Summer. Was wondering if you could check it out and provide some feedback. I really need it so I can improve on my writing. Thank you so much for your time. 

Hello po, dear reader. Recommend ko lang po sana ang sarili ko. I have four BL novels na baka magustuhan mo:
          
          1. Stone
          2. Ark and Apple
          3. Kiss the Rain
          4. Sunset Bucket List
          
          
          I also have award winning short stories form various official wattpad contests na baka ibigin mo rin:
          1. Ang Prinsipe ng Ngihib
          2. Cornflower
          3. Pakilala
          4. Alpas
          
          
          
          You can always check my profile anytime and flood me with comments if you wish. Salamat po.
          
          -JOM❤️
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/326819704?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details&wp_uname=JomGamerland&wp_originator=BBACJUZ0UAWUQsTB0BUJjpBxv7wYscH%2BncuDnJQ9w9r9K7fKLjpquxxrbwmAjFmeYENaPa%2BbL4qWar%2BVZRQY6anLh%2BFoxsQAZjHqg4rN%2BA6UVjs%2BN88tk6kDHbx7IJ6y
          
          

the kind of ending it deserved. thank you for this. it literally brings out the classic me from 2013 ebook era. weeping in bed and cursing in the middle of the night and kilig factors. just got back on being a wattpad reader again and this is one of my favorite write ups so far this year ❤️
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/243824522

How are you, wattpad?