thebrownbutterfly

Hey!!! This is my first book.  Please read it, vote, comment and share.
          	https://www.wattpad.com/story/221163493

DuckDuck_quack_

Hay I updated lock and if let me know what you think it really helps so I know what people like to see

thebrownbutterfly

@wolfgirl5665 You're welcome.  Oh ok.
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DuckDuck_quack_

Hi it me wolfgirl and I just wanted to thank you for your advice and I also wanted to say that the second part that you read is only the start of it
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thebrownbutterfly

@wolfgirl5665 Hey.  The second part is not bad.  I can sort of imagine what is going on, so it is not vague.   It is a bit short though.  I saw a comment addressing the grammar, so I won't dive into that.  Keep writing.  I await the next part.
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LazyGwirl

Hey love❤️
          Could you check my random, short chaptered books out, in your spare time please. 
          I am willing to do the same for your books aswell 

thebrownbutterfly

I didn't even know that could happen.
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LazyGwirl

*my vote button on wattpad is restricted. 
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