thecarnival_isover

AYYYYEEE FIVE AM ENGLISH ESSAY

Yuukathedoll

I love your writing at times it was even made me cry. Your writing to me is bitter-sweet like how there could be beauty in the tragedy. How there is the irony in the brutality. How's there could be light in the darkness. To me it is truly a work of art. You make the charters seem well... alive! As a writer/reader myself I can respect that in your craft. Again I love your work and I hope to read more in the future.

thecarnival_isover

ok if you see this I want your honest opinion, is my writing confusing? I've just had someone tell me its confusing and makes no sense. But I want to create suspense, but how do I do that without being cryptic?

Yuukathedoll

@thecarnival_isover No not at all I find it absolutely wonderful. (Even if there is confusion at times I feel as if it makes your writing more real)
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