@VictoriaKaer is it okay if i message you the scene? It's rather short and its feels kind of shallow to me. Another's critique would be more than perfect
@jai_laz I'd say go read some romance/erotic novels. Reading anything helps me write better, seeing how other authors do it. If you need someone to read let me know. :)
@jai_laz there is no cure, it's mostly finding a way to get your characters to speak to you again. I usually take a break from whatever I'm struggling with. Everyone has a different way of working around writer's block. You just have to find your own way to work through it. :)
I'm looking for someone to critique my book but their payments are so annoying. I'm not good at criticizing that's why I asked for some to critique mine! can anyone please help me find someone who could critique my book without asking for the payment of critique for critique. I would really appreciate it.