ElleLeeLove

Thanks for reading and commenting on my story Forever Remember! Just curious, why did you vote for only chapter 18? What made it better than the others?

ElleLeeLove

@thecupcakelady I have an outline for a prequel about   Dean and Melaney's secret relationship. But it will be in Melaney's pov. I don't know how to think like a guy.   
            
            Yeah, Tyler's falling so quickly for Jasmine is a huge plot hole. I really need to add more to the last part of the story to make it more believable. Though Mimi and Tyler's relationship was over before he dated Jasmine. She wasn't faithful. I should add that in somehow.
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thecupcakelady

@ElleLeeLove oh I'm sorry, whenever I read, I just continue to scroll and totally gets lost in the story and forget about voting. I usually comment more than vote. I love all of it though and I finished it yey! :) I just hope Dean would have a story of his own. I think he got hurt the most and he sacrificed more than any of the characters in the story. And I would love to get an insight to Tyler's head. What made her like Jasmine abruptly when he was into Mimi since the 3rd grade. I mean they hardly even hang out. A bonus story on Tyler's POV perhaps? *wishful thinking* ♡♥♡
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