thedanierenee

To those of you who enjoyed The Evasive Truth- Chapter 1, I re-edited it. It's a lot better than the original version. GO check it out, please :)

TeamTDWR

Didn't mean to bother you, but are you still critiquing?
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_dopegirl_

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Hey, I'm Lexi, and I'd really like your feedback on my first story. I'd really appreciate if you could help me get better at writing, because I really love to write and I try to get better in anyway possible. It's alright if you are harsh, because that's how I learn.
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          Author: Lexiie_Boo
          
          Title: Girls Can Be Thugs Too!
          
          Summary: Lashawna Miller is the top drug dealer in Miami. A Mexican and Black girl standing at 5'3, she isn't to be fucked with. Fool around with her money, and dat's yo ass. She doesn't believe in having a nigga take care of her. It's her all the way. Deshawn Morgan is also a drug dealin' thug nigga. Just like Lashawna, he'll kill to get his money. When they meet, they turn out to be on two different pages. Deshawn thinks they should team up and bring in the money together, while Lashawna is all for herself. When she falls though, who will be the one to help her back up?
          
          Genre: Teen Fiction, Romance.
          
          Thanks!

AppleJuiceisAwesome

Hi! This is actually one of my attempts to improve at my writing and I really hope you can help me out! It'd mean a lot to me, to be honest, and I'll really appreciate it if you do! :D 
          
          Thanks for anything!
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          Author: AppleJuiceisAwesome
          
          Title: Procrastinator's Club
          
          Summary: Jamie is part of a club, and it's his second year of high school. With a new transfer student that the club is desperately trying to recruit, and some suspicious things going around town, Jamie will have to help one way or another. But for now, he'll just juggle the club and trying to figure out WHO exactly this new kid is and why the club's leader seems so interested in him.
          
          Also, what's with the supernatural tendencies?
          
          Genre: Adventure, Humor.

One_of_a_Kind6

Hello! I am looking for a good critique, because frankly, I hate my books, and I just want to see if anyone else likes them.
          
          Author: Devyn Rodriguez (One_of_a_Kind6)
          
          Title: Three Stories, One World
          
          Summary:
            Kristen Adams is a lonely girl. She's shy, doesnt talk much, but then again who blames her, she lives in the chaotic country of Panem.
            When Panem is overrun by Govener Griffin, Kristen joins a rebel group that is determined to hunt down the new president and destroy him. The only thing is, that they have to defeat the werewolves, vampires, and zombies that stand in their way.
            Will Kristen reach her goal? Or will she be shot down? Find out as she brings these three stories, into one world.....
          
          Genre: Fantasy, Mystery/Thriller
          
            I hope that you answer to my message and you can take as long as you want. My story is only 2 chapters so it does not exceed your limit! :3

Sasha1703

Hey! I saw your advertisement for the critique thing and I wanted to tell you details about me as you asked: 
          Author: SashaSalvatore
          Title:Osculate
          Summary: I want to make the summary as interesting as possible but I just can't seem to get the interesting, catchy phrases right now so I'm going to keep it simple. My story is about a star called Leonard Preston who is in love with his girlfriend Amber and when he meets someone his life changes drastically. It's not all romance there's also a bit of suspense. It's my first story and I'm scared so I wanted someone to critique it. 
          I think I've told you the genre already so anyways let me know if you're ready to critique my story.

alyactress01

Hey! My name's Alyssa and I've being a member of Wattpad for quiet a while but I still feel new. I don't know much but I was wondering if I you could check out my story "Surviving Titanic" and give me some recommendations on how to improve. If you can't I understand. Thank you!