NoTimeToWrite999
You need many more followers. You deserve them!!! Your writing is outstanding, I’m only on chapter three of Glitched because I am still slowly absorbing all of that incredibly detailed and thought provoking writing!!! I love the way you describe everything, their emotions and environment they are in, it is outstandingly good!! Chaotically good, is what I should be saying. ;-)
NoTimeToWrite999
That is totally fine with me. I know, one of my own stories gets extremely gory, even for me as a writer, but I am perfectly ok with that. And if it fits the story then I am all for it of course. I meant all that I have said about your writing. The descriptions are pure gold. And seriously, this should be considered a book!!! I love how everything ties in!!! This is perfect. Keeping it up!!
thedarkenedkeeper
@NoTimeToWrite999 Aww well thank you very much, that means a lot to me ^-^ Yeah, when I write, I try to make everything come out as real as possible. By that, I mean you can easily visualise what's going on, feel and understand what the characters are feeling, and in the case of later chapters (ones based off of specific videos), really go into depth on what's happening. At this point, I don't even consider Glitched a fanfic anymore, it's becoming a book XD Just a heads up (since you said you're only on the 3rd chapter), the story goes get really dark and gory as it goes on. Granted, all of the gore in the story is there for a reason - I don't just throw it in to be obscenely gross or anything, it serves a purpose. I know I put in the tags of the story being horror and all that, but I just thought I'd give you a little warning is all :)