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@styleswriter1 when writing is super repetitive for examples “my mind was whirling with ideas.
            dizzy. 
            confused. 
            in need of clarity. 
            
            the grass was freshly mowed.
            green. 
            wet. 
            
            for a moment we didn’t move.
            still.
            like statues. 
            time stopping around us” like it gets sooo old once you see a patten like that  
            
            also when writing is just lazy and everything is a reference to things like actually happened irl. for example if a story says harry got a scar on his chin and it’s the actual reason or if harry bit his tongue from being high off shrooms or telling us just facts about harry like brooo this is LAZY writing with no creativity! same with using all the characters as the 1d boys like really?? can’t people use their imagination and build a new world ?? i’m not trying to read or imagine louis and liam in every single thing. 
            
            also i don’t vibe with the harry pop star/ im working as a photographer / stylist/ mua/ songwriter trope i think it’s repetitive and boring and uninteresting 
            
            another is just fast paced writing w/out build up or tension like  corn without plot basically 
            
            sorry there’s a lot but there’s more too if you can believe it 

@thefinelines its all good! What pet peeves, btw?

@styleswriter1 of course !! & sorry for the late reply!! 

Ahahahahahahahahaahhaha I’ll be posting today 

I’m screaming 

No judging :) !! Love that you enjoy it enough to leave likes :) !! I have a lot of other stories if you need more reading materials haha !

oop!  im binge reading cos i couldn’t sleep sorry for the spam liking LOL that’s embarrassing but YES im enjoying so much !!!