@thegayweb
Thank you for the lovely comment I am sorry fact you’ve got your hopes up for melody to be reunited with the boys, but I’ve got a really good idea and I’m currently working on it. I’ve done the description but I don’t know when it’s gonna be published next because honestly it’s hard being a writer and I’ve got so many stories I need to finish and you kind of lose track of the plot of your story because you’ve got so many unfinished ones
Yes your right about the oc there are not that many characters like her that's why I wrote her as an vulnerable emotional girl and there are not that many storys like mine that's why I wrote it and made Marko more darker and better I hope you enjoy reading the rest
I wanted to do something different relationship with Sam and Michael. You never really see it and in my opinion, it makes it a lot more interesting and better read with intensity and it shows how melody really is and like I just wanted to write something different something unique because most people write some Michael and they’re added siblings relationship
I'm only asking because you never see Sam/ Michael with a bad relationship with their add siblings in other stories.
@amberandshadow you don't have to answer in case it's a spoiler for your story but I wanted to ask why you wrote Michael and Sam relationship with her that way? (Not saying it's not good because I like it) is it just to add another level of vulnerability or was it just because?
thank you for voting on my story I appreciate it.
@amberandshadow I haven't finished all the chapters that are out yet but what i have read about the main character (OC? I don't know what to call it) I really resonate with her and how you describe her anxiety/emotion is really good. I also like that you didn't make her the badass hot girl like a lot of others (nothing against that, I just feel like the lost boys would go after someone more vulnerable like in the movie.) also you don't see a lot of Marko central stories, they usually push him aside.
yeah I don’t plan on abandoning it any time soon. I’ve got another few tractors in drafts which I’m working on and they will be published soon. I’m glad you like it and it’s readable but what’s your favourite part about it like what made you wanna read it if you don’t mind me asking.
@amberandshadow no problem I really like it and conceding yours is one of the few Lost boys stories that is readable and not abandoned it's really good can't wait to read more!
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