Thischickisbomb

Hey can you ready my story and tell me what you think. Please leave a comment stating If its good or bad.
          
          How Can I Ever Get Passed This.
          
          Sydney's life seems perfect untill that one faithful night that makes her cry herself to sleep every night. How can she ever get passed it

maryasha

hi, would you mind reading my story, i would love some constructive criticism and what you think about it
          
          "All Boy's School Survival Guide" for girls
          
          Synopsis:
          
          Aliza is in a binding situation, literally! With her breasts constricted, wearing her brother's loose clothing, and dropping her voice to the lowest level, she's attending Ascham, an all boy's school! If that's not enough, throw in an extremely hot roommate, who suspects Aliza, aka Alex, of not being exactly what "he" appears to be and you have a chaotic relationship---if you can even call it that.
          http://www.wattpad.com/257206-quot-all-boys-school-survival-guide-quot-for-girls
          
          Please read the first two chapters before you decide if you want to continue reading it or not :3