To be honest, yesterday's chapter, chapter nine, was the longest and most emotionally charged chapter I've ever read. It took me over an hour to finish. Note: I was busy, but I'll continue reading later to see where I left off, considering the suspense, the story, and its length.
You truly excelled, with a length and emotions overflowing in your story.
I hope Rob and Gumball's relationship starts off tense and then improves, as you know, when Gumball and Rob meet. Rob is Gumball's sworn enemy, but they went through something similar: Rob and the Void, and Gumball in the parallel world, terrifying from Elmore.