thegrandcero

Another one shot before the Watcherrrr, or should I say rewrite! On an episode I both like and dislike:
          	
          	https://www.wattpad.com/story/407238927-the-fridge-alternate-ending

zinab8888

To be honest, yesterday's chapter, chapter nine, was the longest and most emotionally charged chapter I've ever read. It took me over an hour to finish. Note: I was busy, but I'll continue reading later to see where I left off, considering the suspense, the story, and its length.
          
          You truly excelled, with a length and emotions overflowing in your story. 
          
          I hope Rob and Gumball's relationship starts off tense and then improves, as you know, when Gumball and Rob meet. Rob is Gumball's sworn enemy, but they went through something similar: Rob and the Void, and Gumball in the parallel world, terrifying from Elmore.

zinab8888

@ thegrandcero  okey
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thegrandcero

@zinab8888 interesting dynamic suggestion... 
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zinab8888

I support you every day you post, make sure
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zinab8888

In the next chapter of your story about the observer, I'm excited because I think Rob might intervene. Or Gumball might run away because he doesn't want anyone to get hurt, since his personality has improved and he doesn't want his friends or family to get hurt any more than they already have. But Rob will definitely have a crucial role. 

thegrandcero

@zinab8888 Oh, Rob and Gumball will both have big roles... let's just say I have plans for both of them 
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thegrandcero

Well then, I'll be taking advantage of this little announcement thingy for the first time here lol
          
          Update: At the end of this upcoming week, the P1. 1 Finale of "The Watcher" is dropping. I've made it to the revision stage. LETS GOOO>
          I'll just go ahead and say this: 60. Thousand. Words. That's how long this next chapter is, and I'm HYPED.
          
          I didn't want the story to drag as most long fics do, but I also wanted to give it an effortful ending, so I'm ending this with a bang. And... perhaps a character who has yet to make an appearance in the story will perhaps be playing a role in this next chapter... wink.
          
          I also actually took the time to update my profile. I was kind of lazy to do that when I first started, but eh, I figured, why not, since I'm already this invested in fanfiction at this point 
          
          That's it for now, seeya in the next chapterrr

NicStar21100

@thegrandcero A 60K WORDS CHAPTER!? Argh, I will have so much trouble reading this. But I have to
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zinab8888

Is your story complete or not?

zinab8888

@ thegrandcero  okey
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thegrandcero

@zinab8888 not yet, but keep an eye out for another chapter maybe later today 
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