DamianSmithVampire

Hello,I have immensely enjoyed your book,the story is very detailed and delightful to read.
          I am also a new author myself,and I am working on my first book, so far I have completed 2 chapters. If you find yourself with a few moments to spare,could you read my book and give me feedback so I can continue writing. Greatly appreciated.
          
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thegraverose

@DamianSmithVampire  thank you so much! I'm really glad you're enjoying my story! 
            I just took a look at your story and it looks really good, I love your writing style!
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OmphemetseGare

Try making your chapters long

thegraverose

@OmphemetseGare I'll be getting some longer chapters up soon! I try and update a few times a week when I have short chapters but I've been a little busy with the holidays. I should have one a little longer one up within the next few days. Thanks!
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