thehiddenstar_

Hi everyone 
          	
          	I just published Chapter 3 of my very first Harmandhana fanfiction, and honestly… I still can’t believe I finally posted it. I was extremely nervous before publishing this story, so seeing people read, vote, comment, and support it has genuinely made me so happy.
          	
          	Every single comment, vote, and reaction means a lot to me, especially because this is my first story. Thank you to everyone who has taken the time to read it and share your thoughts so far ✨
          	
          	If you’ve been reading and enjoying the story, it would mean a lot if you could vote or leave a comment — it truly makes my day and motivates me to keep writing the upcoming chapters 
          	
          	Thank you once again for all the love and support you all have shown this story till now 
          	
          	~ Hidden Star  
          	
          	

thehiddenstar_

@maithili200 This is so sweet genuinely  thank you so much for reading and supporting the story… comments like these really make me so happy and motivated to keep writing ✨!!!
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maithili200

@thehiddenstar_ You write so well; each and every emotion is conveyed beautifully. Waiting for your next update, author ji 
          	  
          	  
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Bobby_Brincis

Hello Dude! ❤️
          
          I'm currently working on a story called "Until You Arrived".
          
          What makes this story special to me is that it features an intersex main character (Harmanpreet Karu) and a romance at its heart. I haven't come across many stories with this combination, so I wanted to create something different while also focusing on family, healing, friendship, and love.
          
          This is my first time writing a story like this, and I would really appreciate your support. ✨
          
          If you have some free time, please give it a read and let me know:
          
          What you liked
          What could be improved
          Any mistakes you notice
          Suggestions for character development or plot
          
          Your feedback will help me grow as a writer and make the story better.
          
          Thank you so much for your support! ❤️
          
          Story Title: Until You Arrived

Bobby_Brincis

Thankyou dude I try to do my best
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thehiddenstar_

@Bobby_Brincis Hi! Thank you for reaching out 
            
            I read the first chapter and honestly I enjoyed it. The story feels interesting already and it definitely made me curious about where you're planning to take it next.
            
            What stood out to me the most was the family dynamic, especially the Bhullar sisters. Their interactions were really fun to read and I'd love to see more of their banter and relationship as the story progresses.
            
            Harman's character also caught my attention pretty quickly. She has a strong presence from the start, and there were a few hints about Smriti and her family situation that definitely made me curious.
            
            I don't think I'm experienced enough to give technical writing advice, but as a reader, the emotional and family aspects were the parts that interested me the most.
            
            Overall, I think it's a solid start and you've given readers enough questions to make them want to continue reading.
            
            Wishing you all the best with the story and thank you again for sharing it with me ✨!!!
            
            
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thehiddenstar_

Hi everyone 
          
          I just published Chapter 3 of my very first Harmandhana fanfiction, and honestly… I still can’t believe I finally posted it. I was extremely nervous before publishing this story, so seeing people read, vote, comment, and support it has genuinely made me so happy.
          
          Every single comment, vote, and reaction means a lot to me, especially because this is my first story. Thank you to everyone who has taken the time to read it and share your thoughts so far ✨
          
          If you’ve been reading and enjoying the story, it would mean a lot if you could vote or leave a comment — it truly makes my day and motivates me to keep writing the upcoming chapters 
          
          Thank you once again for all the love and support you all have shown this story till now 
          
          ~ Hidden Star  
          
          

thehiddenstar_

@maithili200 This is so sweet genuinely  thank you so much for reading and supporting the story… comments like these really make me so happy and motivated to keep writing ✨!!!
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maithili200

@thehiddenstar_ You write so well; each and every emotion is conveyed beautifully. Waiting for your next update, author ji 
            
            
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