@itsasecret_evenidk so I finally finished reading it! I thought it was brilliant! I love that they turn into babies, that’s just… that’s just the best. In terms of feedback, all I would say is that I’d be really interested to read scenes from when Aster was a child. She could be struggling now as a baby to get back to her more conscious self and find herself plagued with memories of her childhood. That way we could find out more about her. So that if we do meet her family they’ll be even more emotion behind it. But other than that I love it!
If there’s anything else more specific you want my help with, please ask! Xx