None of ur beeswax

I was wondering if you could read my story and my poem. You seem honest and I like that. Please post your honest opinion. Thank you.
          
          Sincerely Yours,
          Evangeline

@thehonestbitch here are the links and thanks very much in advance
          
          http://www.wattpad.com/350604-remember-that-i-love-you
          
          http://www.wattpad.com/330664-even-in-your-dreams-you-miss-me
          
          by the way i changed the very long title to something a bit short and blunt. thanks for that.

@xsistertosleepx ok ok send me a link and ill do it for sure

@xsistertosleepx  I would actually really appreciate it they aren't very long and I really need YOUR critique specifically :)

@thehonestbitch hahaha ur welcome xD

7 fans?!?!?! oh my gosh the queen bitches are honored! thanks to everyone!

did i say, really didn't have any?
          
          I meant has none xD lmao .. I'm planning on putting some in, ut seriously, i have no idea how to write about sex :p how embarassing ryt? Haha
          
          bye! [ok, my last comment, sorry about annoying u]

Oh, and my stories have nothing to do with vampires and doesn't really have any sex :p lol .. So in other words, its ummm different?
          
          Ok, i sound stupid, im just guna stop nw .. Bye!

Hey!! I know, people are hating on you xD its kinda funny, no offence .. Hehe
          
          could you check out my story please!
          
          -Guardian Angel + Me = NOT good, is the one I'm working on a lot right now and I would really appreciate you're opinion, critiscm [dnt knw hw to spell tht], even if its bad xD lol
          
          I have other ones, but you can decide weither you want to read them or not ...
          
          I would really appreciate ur HONEST opinion .. 
          
          Thank you in advance, for if u read it ^^

hey I have seen some of your comments here and there and I respect your opinion
          It would mean a lot if YOU specifically YOU the honestbitch
          (i'm trying to prove that i have not copied and pasted this to several profiles)
          could pretty please read my story;
          -Remember That I Love You
          -Even In your dreams you miss me
          
          I have another piece up there called Romeo and Juliet blah blah blah but I have no respect for that story, I use it for a few fans and votes :)
          
          thanks in advance
          xsistertosleepx