Um, ideas...
Why is she Alpha now? Was it her birthday? (hit a certain age thing) Was it because of birth right or wolf strength? (based on your story so far I'm guessing birth right) why did she let Lily beat her up that day in school? How was lily able to kick her ass so readily? (older and more training or Haden just let her?)
Why does she want to keep a low profile at school? What's the tension between the wolves and camps from? If Coreys sister knows her one love is a wolf (and probably knows which one) why does she agree to merge with Lily's pack to destroy Jadens? Was there potentially a relationship between those 2? A little more rivalry between Corey & lily would be awesome, or maybe a shot pov from her at some point...
As for the relationship other then cuddling and one or two make out scenes you didn't 'bond' them very much. You don't have to go all out but the second book does allude to a slightly more physical relationship... Also Jayden starts thinking she's strait but there is no struggle to Corey being her potential mate (with a lesbian beta we know that's not a problem for her but still). Also no reaction from Jayden at all when Corey says she's her one love? Anger, surprise, denial, shock, nothin? Also why didn't Corey come back that night she told her to leave the window open for her? We know she left to feed but said she would come back
I don't know if you like any of this but you never know :)
