thelolp777

Hey guys, happy new year! Just want to let you know that updates for the fanfic are really going to be slow because I have some unfortunate news.
          	
          	Recently, my original story, The Silent Heir, is on track to be polished and so I decided to figure out what to do next when I saw it. Now I may be overreacting but man did it put a huge damper on my mood. It appears that if I wanted to publish, the story must not be posted in free reading sites like wattpad because publishers would want to have exclusivity and all. The chances of getting publisher to pick it after doing so, if from what I've read is accurate, is really low.
          	
          	It has been advised to simply take down my story from online like wattpad before quering agents if they are interested in my final manuscript... I am at a total lost. I'm not sure if I had just wasted 4 years of my life for nothing or I am just mistaken. In the event I had to take it down to have a shot, I just want to let you all know, my original readers of the story, to give it one last go if you want to because I cannot guarantee it will stay at all.
          	
          	So sorry for this news, especially on new year's but I simply don't know what to do and want to brace myself and you guys before I do take that route.
          	
          	
          	
          	
          	
          	If anyone has any insight or ideas on publishing in these kinds of scenario, I would greatly appreciate the help. 

thelolp777

@Adivonna man this is the biggest relief I had. I hope this is true, thanks for the insight and happy new year! 
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Adivonna

@Adivonna But still, the story will have to be taken down
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Adivonna

@thelolp777 I've been looking i to traditional publishing and I discovered the same thing. You haven't wasted the past four years. Your story can still get an agent. You just need to change the story a bit, and get a different title when querying. That will be better
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thelolp777

Hey guys, happy new year! Just want to let you know that updates for the fanfic are really going to be slow because I have some unfortunate news.
          
          Recently, my original story, The Silent Heir, is on track to be polished and so I decided to figure out what to do next when I saw it. Now I may be overreacting but man did it put a huge damper on my mood. It appears that if I wanted to publish, the story must not be posted in free reading sites like wattpad because publishers would want to have exclusivity and all. The chances of getting publisher to pick it after doing so, if from what I've read is accurate, is really low.
          
          It has been advised to simply take down my story from online like wattpad before quering agents if they are interested in my final manuscript... I am at a total lost. I'm not sure if I had just wasted 4 years of my life for nothing or I am just mistaken. In the event I had to take it down to have a shot, I just want to let you all know, my original readers of the story, to give it one last go if you want to because I cannot guarantee it will stay at all.
          
          So sorry for this news, especially on new year's but I simply don't know what to do and want to brace myself and you guys before I do take that route.
          
          
          
          
          
          If anyone has any insight or ideas on publishing in these kinds of scenario, I would greatly appreciate the help. 

thelolp777

@Adivonna man this is the biggest relief I had. I hope this is true, thanks for the insight and happy new year! 
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Adivonna

@Adivonna But still, the story will have to be taken down
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Adivonna

@thelolp777 I've been looking i to traditional publishing and I discovered the same thing. You haven't wasted the past four years. Your story can still get an agent. You just need to change the story a bit, and get a different title when querying. That will be better
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thelolp777

Just made some 40k x got fanfic. Not going to replace ire of mankind, just a back burner to try remove me from my slump. Hope you enjoyed!
          
          It called Lord of Winter btw

thelolp777

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@thelolp777 just russ being grumpy after the heresy and finds himself on planetos with his wolf guard and having the normal humans there absolutely shook at their tech and shitz. Would be fun to write how the noble houses tip toes their way around the great wolf and having some arrogant empires (old valayria, not sure if I spell that right, not much of a got or asoiaf fan) being nuke to oblivion when russ has had enough of their shit and just order his bois to go wild
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D4RKS0ul225946870

@ thelolp777  Now the good stuff begins, but what's it about? Because I haven't read the prologue yet. I'm at the office working on my legal practice. I hope you manage to write your thesis so you can keep uploading fanfics, bro. As for me, my final exams start in two weeks.
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thelolp777

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Hey guys just a heads up. Currently stuck on a slump rn and my 4th and final year in college is about to start so I might not upload for a month or so (I fucking blame thesis to hell). No worries the fic will never be abandoned it will end one way or the other but for now, I guess yall have to wait. 

D4RKS0ul225946870

A question: Will the Adeptus Arbites be assigned to the population so they can monitor civilians and Tempestus Kindred and see how the UNCS Marines react? How does the relationship between the Imperial Guard and Tempestus Kindred compare to that of ODSTs and Spartans?
          
          I consider them equal to Spartan 4s and Tempestus Kindred. Obviously, the Tempestus lack power armor, but from what I understand, they receive small genetic enhancements from Life Extension Technologies, such as steroids, etc. There's a Spanish YouTuber who gave me feats, but I'm skeptical about them: where he jumps over a two-meter-high orc, or where he punches a cultist wearing a plate and causes him to go into cardiac arrest, or where he grabs another cultist's wrist and breaks it.
          
          excuse my google english

thelolp777

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@D4RKS0ul225946870 it would be funny but seeing Horus is currently witnessing the heresy, he is more than likely ashamed to the max to even face his brothers. Not to mention custodes. They were there when it happened, especially Hyperion. If Hyperion was deadset on throwing hands, despite in the presence of not one, but three fucking primarchs, it is safe to say that the moment the custodes gets even a whiff of Horus, they would do everything within their reach to kill him. And since Hyperion is still alive well.... Horus will have some interesting time to say the least. Still writing it now, but I may as well add some sauce. If you want to read a bit of spoilers go ahead.
            
            
            
            The custodes can't directly kill Horus. The sheer panic that would cause the imperials should the information leak would shift their focus from killing the xenos to hunting the arch traitor. They practically go full assassin mode and try to kill him discreetly while his brothers protecting him. It's going to be so fun having the normals being confused as to why the custodes are doing some random shit while oni and the upper imperials slowly losing their shit as they discovered what the actual fuck are the custodes doing. 
            
            Imagine trying to find your boss because he kept going missing on meetings and stumbling on his table to find messages that Lucifer is still alive and they're trying to kill him. That would freak them tf out. 
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D4RKS0ul225946870

@thelolp777 It would be funny to me that when Horus introduces himself as a Primarch and the UNCs approach praising him until an Imperial hears the name of the arch traitor, the Primarch Horus Lupercal, and begins to shout where the rest remember that they only know the name of the traitor primarchs, not what they look like. And blood angel black rage
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thelolp777

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@D4RKS0ul225946870 man how did I missed this question. Might be late, but not atm. I want to focus more on the primarchs in the coming chapters. How the UNSC goes "Hey guys we see this big dude with angel wings. He looks dope ngl." then have the imperials go "Oh I guess that- HOLD ON WTF?!"
            
            I've been writing how the UNSC get shock with the iom, I think it's time for them to shock the iom. Can't wait to write UNSC semi casually talking to a primarch while the imperials are losing their shit, terrified if their younger counterparts had somehow offended their saints. 
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GodHoward

After seeing his betrayal and the state of the Imperium being his fault, I could see Horus weeping. Also, is it just the 3 primarchs and their 1st captains or the 3 primarchs and their entire crusade fleets? I hope it's the latter. Would love some Imperial Army and Solar Auxilia action.

XavierGulley

@thelolp777 if it has to stay this way to keep the story together I'd personally prefer it this way at the same time you're writing is pretty good as well I don't have to decipher the sentences like I'm some sort of spy and the cherry on top the sentences flow really well 
            keep up the good work I'm looking forward to the next update
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thelolp777

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@GodHoward as much as I would love to write tranzyn casually dropping some forerunners he somehow managed to get and scaring the shit out of the covies to have their supposed god be captured as if it was a toy, the focus would go out of control. I'm already struggling keeping the story together, but adding more of them would just ruin the focus. So yeah sadly it would only remain focus on the human covenant war with UNSC calling on their big cousins to give the covies a wedgy they fucking deserved. 
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GodHoward

@thelolp777 Then add the Necrons and Orks and have the majority of those fleets focus on them. I just want my Imperial Army and Solar Auxilia glazing.
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D4RKS0ul225946870

https://m.fanfiction.net/s/13969804/4/ and https://m.fanfiction.net/s/14144321/1/Los-Paladines-del-Holy-Imperium. They are two good Warhammer stories, one is Warhammer x Game of Thrones and the other is Warhammer x Overlord. I hope you don't mind me posting these pages but I want to support other channels that are English speaking and I know they would like it a lot

D4RKS0ul225946870

@thelolp777 There is a Konrad Curze fanfic in GOT but it is from Russia, it was difficult for me to read it translated because it is all united in a single text because it is on a Russian website.
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@D4RKS0ul225946870 not sure if my support matters that much really considering I'm only posting my ff on wattpad but man... I want that GOT crossover to update already. I want to see the northmen oogling like children before rus's sons. I swear if the author abandons that shit I'm making another ff with 40k and Got but with thousand sons this time just to fuck with the author. I actually once considered on making a ff where Rus was on exile after the heresy and just being grumpy and shit while traveling the world, scaring the poor bastards by his presence radiating pure annoyance and self loathing at the emperor's injury. Would be funny to read where the mad king is demanding Rus to be imprisoned because of his paranoid ass only for Rus to walk all the way to kings landing, slaughtering any army with ease and standing before the mad king who is shitting himself as Rus simply give a warning to fuck around and find out before walking and sulking again. 
            
            Also have you read thy good neighbor? Hands down THE best ff author. His choice of words and description of the story is just so damn sublime. It's a bloodborne and Got crossover btw where an endgame ascendant hunter do a little trolling on the umies
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D4RKS0ul225946870

@thelolp777 Yes, I understand it and I don't want to be annoying. Personally, I loved your Warhammer writing and then I also found others who like to write their stories but don't have much support, so I would like you to support them. It was only this time because they are the ones I liked the most and the ones who continue writing.
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thelolp777

Final chapter for the silent heir is almost done! Just need to polish it and make the epologue and were done for book one! I hope you all ready for it! Merry Christmas everyone and a happy new year! 

nike01x2

@thelolp777 happy new year 
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Adivonna

@thelolp777 Ooh. Happy new year!
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