@thelolp777
new “The Silent Heir” cover?
@sageeeez yep! Found some guide how gpt could make covers and since I can't contact the og creator of my first cover anymore, I decided to give it a try. Ngl, I was not expecting it to be this good
FINALLY GRADUATED WOOOOO! Gonna continue that chapter now in celebration of this achievement!
Man i love your silent heir story it was epic I am lucky that I read it before u remove it ... It was really good and emotional at end man..↕️♥️
@steffiangel127 thank you for reading! Always appreciate a commentor reader! Hope you follow book 2 and 3... As soon as I can publish at least
Hey guys, happy new year! Just want to let you know that updates for the fanfic are really going to be slow because I have some unfortunate news.
Recently, my original story, The Silent Heir, is on track to be polished and so I decided to figure out what to do next when I saw it. Now I may be overreacting but man did it put a huge damper on my mood. It appears that if I wanted to publish, the story must not be posted in free reading sites like wattpad because publishers would want to have exclusivity and all. The chances of getting publisher to pick it after doing so, if from what I've read is accurate, is really low.
It has been advised to simply take down my story from online like wattpad before quering agents if they are interested in my final manuscript... I am at a total lost. I'm not sure if I had just wasted 4 years of my life for nothing or I am just mistaken. In the event I had to take it down to have a shot, I just want to let you all know, my original readers of the story, to give it one last go if you want to because I cannot guarantee it will stay at all.
So sorry for this news, especially on new year's but I simply don't know what to do and want to brace myself and you guys before I do take that route.
If anyone has any insight or ideas on publishing in these kinds of scenario, I would greatly appreciate the help.
@Adivonna man this is the biggest relief I had. I hope this is true, thanks for the insight and happy new year!
@thelolp777 I've been looking i to traditional publishing and I discovered the same thing. You haven't wasted the past four years. Your story can still get an agent. You just need to change the story a bit, and get a different title when querying. That will be better
Just made some 40k x got fanfic. Not going to replace ire of mankind, just a back burner to try remove me from my slump. Hope you enjoyed!
It called Lord of Winter btw
@thelolp777 just russ being grumpy after the heresy and finds himself on planetos with his wolf guard and having the normal humans there absolutely shook at their tech and shitz. Would be fun to write how the noble houses tip toes their way around the great wolf and having some arrogant empires (old valayria, not sure if I spell that right, not much of a got or asoiaf fan) being nuke to oblivion when russ has had enough of their shit and just order his bois to go wild
@ thelolp777 Now the good stuff begins, but what's it about? Because I haven't read the prologue yet. I'm at the office working on my legal practice. I hope you manage to write your thesis so you can keep uploading fanfics, bro. As for me, my final exams start in two weeks.
Hey guys just a heads up. Currently stuck on a slump rn and my 4th and final year in college is about to start so I might not upload for a month or so (I fucking blame thesis to hell). No worries the fic will never be abandoned it will end one way or the other but for now, I guess yall have to wait.
Will the ire of mankind continue
@StanleyMkandawire7 certainly, I'm just stuck at a rump atm. Can't make my dialogues work so I'm trying to fix it
A question: Will the Adeptus Arbites be assigned to the population so they can monitor civilians and Tempestus Kindred and see how the UNCS Marines react? How does the relationship between the Imperial Guard and Tempestus Kindred compare to that of ODSTs and Spartans?
I consider them equal to Spartan 4s and Tempestus Kindred. Obviously, the Tempestus lack power armor, but from what I understand, they receive small genetic enhancements from Life Extension Technologies, such as steroids, etc. There's a Spanish YouTuber who gave me feats, but I'm skeptical about them: where he jumps over a two-meter-high orc, or where he punches a cultist wearing a plate and causes him to go into cardiac arrest, or where he grabs another cultist's wrist and breaks it.
excuse my google english
@D4RKS0ul225946870 it would be funny but seeing Horus is currently witnessing the heresy, he is more than likely ashamed to the max to even face his brothers. Not to mention custodes. They were there when it happened, especially Hyperion. If Hyperion was deadset on throwing hands, despite in the presence of not one, but three fucking primarchs, it is safe to say that the moment the custodes gets even a whiff of Horus, they would do everything within their reach to kill him. And since Hyperion is still alive well.... Horus will have some interesting time to say the least. Still writing it now, but I may as well add some sauce. If you want to read a bit of spoilers go ahead. The custodes can't directly kill Horus. The sheer panic that would cause the imperials should the information leak would shift their focus from killing the xenos to hunting the arch traitor. They practically go full assassin mode and try to kill him discreetly while his brothers protecting him. It's going to be so fun having the normals being confused as to why the custodes are doing some random shit while oni and the upper imperials slowly losing their shit as they discovered what the actual fuck are the custodes doing. Imagine trying to find your boss because he kept going missing on meetings and stumbling on his table to find messages that Lucifer is still alive and they're trying to kill him. That would freak them tf out.
@thelolp777 It would be funny to me that when Horus introduces himself as a Primarch and the UNCs approach praising him until an Imperial hears the name of the arch traitor, the Primarch Horus Lupercal, and begins to shout where the rest remember that they only know the name of the traitor primarchs, not what they look like. And blood angel black rage
@D4RKS0ul225946870 man how did I missed this question. Might be late, but not atm. I want to focus more on the primarchs in the coming chapters. How the UNSC goes "Hey guys we see this big dude with angel wings. He looks dope ngl." then have the imperials go "Oh I guess that- HOLD ON WTF?!" I've been writing how the UNSC get shock with the iom, I think it's time for them to shock the iom. Can't wait to write UNSC semi casually talking to a primarch while the imperials are losing their shit, terrified if their younger counterparts had somehow offended their saints.
After seeing his betrayal and the state of the Imperium being his fault, I could see Horus weeping. Also, is it just the 3 primarchs and their 1st captains or the 3 primarchs and their entire crusade fleets? I hope it's the latter. Would love some Imperial Army and Solar Auxilia action.
@thelolp777 if it has to stay this way to keep the story together I'd personally prefer it this way at the same time you're writing is pretty good as well I don't have to decipher the sentences like I'm some sort of spy and the cherry on top the sentences flow really well keep up the good work I'm looking forward to the next update
@GodHoward as much as I would love to write tranzyn casually dropping some forerunners he somehow managed to get and scaring the shit out of the covies to have their supposed god be captured as if it was a toy, the focus would go out of control. I'm already struggling keeping the story together, but adding more of them would just ruin the focus. So yeah sadly it would only remain focus on the human covenant war with UNSC calling on their big cousins to give the covies a wedgy they fucking deserved.
@thelolp777 Then add the Necrons and Orks and have the majority of those fleets focus on them. I just want my Imperial Army and Solar Auxilia glazing.
Update would be slow guys. Thesis is here and I need to beat this mf. I also had to fix my dialogue. I am not happy with it so pls wait while I cook something good
