thelolp777

Update would be slow guys. Thesis is here and I need to beat this mf. I also had to fix my dialogue. I am not happy with it so pls wait while I cook something good

D4RKS0ul225946870

A question: Will the Adeptus Arbites be assigned to the population so they can monitor civilians and Tempestus Kindred and see how the UNCS Marines react? How does the relationship between the Imperial Guard and Tempestus Kindred compare to that of ODSTs and Spartans?
          
          I consider them equal to Spartan 4s and Tempestus Kindred. Obviously, the Tempestus lack power armor, but from what I understand, they receive small genetic enhancements from Life Extension Technologies, such as steroids, etc. There's a Spanish YouTuber who gave me feats, but I'm skeptical about them: where he jumps over a two-meter-high orc, or where he punches a cultist wearing a plate and causes him to go into cardiac arrest, or where he grabs another cultist's wrist and breaks it.
          
          excuse my google english

GodHoward

After seeing his betrayal and the state of the Imperium being his fault, I could see Horus weeping. Also, is it just the 3 primarchs and their 1st captains or the 3 primarchs and their entire crusade fleets? I hope it's the latter. Would love some Imperial Army and Solar Auxilia action.

XavierGulley

@thelolp777 if it has to stay this way to keep the story together I'd personally prefer it this way at the same time you're writing is pretty good as well I don't have to decipher the sentences like I'm some sort of spy and the cherry on top the sentences flow really well 
            keep up the good work I'm looking forward to the next update
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thelolp777

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@GodHoward as much as I would love to write tranzyn casually dropping some forerunners he somehow managed to get and scaring the shit out of the covies to have their supposed god be captured as if it was a toy, the focus would go out of control. I'm already struggling keeping the story together, but adding more of them would just ruin the focus. So yeah sadly it would only remain focus on the human covenant war with UNSC calling on their big cousins to give the covies a wedgy they fucking deserved. 
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GodHoward

@thelolp777 Then add the Necrons and Orks and have the majority of those fleets focus on them. I just want my Imperial Army and Solar Auxilia glazing.
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D4RKS0ul225946870

https://m.fanfiction.net/s/13969804/4/ and https://m.fanfiction.net/s/14144321/1/Los-Paladines-del-Holy-Imperium. They are two good Warhammer stories, one is Warhammer x Game of Thrones and the other is Warhammer x Overlord. I hope you don't mind me posting these pages but I want to support other channels that are English speaking and I know they would like it a lot

D4RKS0ul225946870

@thelolp777 There is a Konrad Curze fanfic in GOT but it is from Russia, it was difficult for me to read it translated because it is all united in a single text because it is on a Russian website.
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thelolp777

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@D4RKS0ul225946870 not sure if my support matters that much really considering I'm only posting my ff on wattpad but man... I want that GOT crossover to update already. I want to see the northmen oogling like children before rus's sons. I swear if the author abandons that shit I'm making another ff with 40k and Got but with thousand sons this time just to fuck with the author. I actually once considered on making a ff where Rus was on exile after the heresy and just being grumpy and shit while traveling the world, scaring the poor bastards by his presence radiating pure annoyance and self loathing at the emperor's injury. Would be funny to read where the mad king is demanding Rus to be imprisoned because of his paranoid ass only for Rus to walk all the way to kings landing, slaughtering any army with ease and standing before the mad king who is shitting himself as Rus simply give a warning to fuck around and find out before walking and sulking again. 
            
            Also have you read thy good neighbor? Hands down THE best ff author. His choice of words and description of the story is just so damn sublime. It's a bloodborne and Got crossover btw where an endgame ascendant hunter do a little trolling on the umies
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D4RKS0ul225946870

@thelolp777 Yes, I understand it and I don't want to be annoying. Personally, I loved your Warhammer writing and then I also found others who like to write their stories but don't have much support, so I would like you to support them. It was only this time because they are the ones I liked the most and the ones who continue writing.
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thelolp777

Final chapter for the silent heir is almost done! Just need to polish it and make the epologue and were done for book one! I hope you all ready for it! Merry Christmas everyone and a happy new year! 

Boljin

Hi good day um just asking are the eldar truly a doom or a surviving   race because in their lore it said the can reincarnated in 12 different ways thanks to slaanesh they are doom but if slaanesh dies they will have their people and their world back even do if they failed  and the galaxy is doom by chaos the chaos leaves the galaxy to go and hunt new galaxies slaanesh hold no longer existed and the eldar  souls will be free from slaanesh hold and those begging their reincarnation again and theirs this ynnari growing in numbers and have a chance to bring their people back and their alliance with the imperium they could live in the outer galaxy since the imperium claim the inner galaxy the core is the leagues of voltan  like it’s weird since every novel theirs always an eldar faction  and lastly they should get a better new  story since the last one was not that great at all ?

thelolp777

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@Boljin This is still pending, but as of my plans for the story, the eldar are free from the reaches of chaos. Since this is an entirely different galaxy and time, the woih never occurred. The warp in halo is such a paradise that the psykers are scared out of their minds, it felt too good to be true. Skyla literally led an entire fleet alone because the other navigators are out of action, and she manages to do so with little hiccups because of how clean and untainted the warp was. It is also for this reason that Hyperion, when he arrived at the craftworld, did not immediately run up to fight. Aside from being surrounded and alone, he instinctively knew that these eldars are much stronger than the 40k ones because they are no longer hiding their true power. Adding two of their gods are alive (clowny is out of action for the moment, he was injured in the escape) makes the eldar of these ff to be REALLY strong and are recovering. Of course they won't fuck themselves to death this time since they KNOW what would happen if they do and are not willing to waste their second chance.
            
            SPOILERS BELOW! IF YOU WANT TO KNOW WHY I MADE THEM THIS WAY!
            
            
            
            
            Remember when Isha described how big e essentially throw hands with the gods to buy her and Cegorach time to escape? It was because big cheese hoped that with time and effort, the eldar could recover their power in the halo galaxy before coming back with them and some iom in tow to free the galaxy once and for all. Of course, this is a giant gamble but it is one big e took.
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Re59830

pls tell me you didnt abandon " the villainess is coming home" i need a distraction before final exams.

thelolp777

@Re59830 yeah I'm having exam this coming Wed... and I have project due at the same day... College sucks man. But gl to your exams as well. We're going to need it. 
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Re59830

Ok. Thanks for the update. I appreciate it. Good look with your fall semester as were heading towards final exam season!!!!!
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3unBun

@thelolp777 I’ve already read it :\ lol . Okay well thank you for the reply and make sure to take care of your health!
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