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No it shouldn't be the end it just got good. You should make them all live, kill off Louise, then make Charlie start to like the reader, then Dan will get jealous, then the reader and Charlie date for a little until Dan has had enough, Dan invites Charlie over for dinner one day while Phil is out, then as Charlie goes into the bathroom to take a big dump because Dan puts something I'm his food that makes him have to take a major shit, as Charlie is in the bathroom for like 15 minutes Dan takes Charlie's phone and texts the reader pretending to be Charlie, he says that he has been cheating on her with four other women and he has to break up with her, she gets all mad and sad and as Charlie is leaving Dan's house he runs into the reader and she runs away into Dan's open arms, she kisses Dan to prove to Charlie that she was over him, he gets mad and him and Dan fight, the reader tries to stop them but only gets hurt in the process, Dan and Charlie both get really worried about her as she ran out of Dan's flat, they find her Dan tells her that it was all a lie that he told to try to get with the reader, Charlie says that he actually has been cheating on the reader, the reader cries into Dan's arms, Dan kicks Charlie out and tells him never to come back onto their lives, the reader sleeps over Dan and Phil's flat and she sleeps on the couch in the living room, she wakes up in the middle of the night from a nightmare, in the nightmare Dan died and it was Charlie who killed him Phil was in on it, the reader walks up to Dan's bedroom door and knocks lightly, there is no answer so she goes in and wakes him up, she tells him all about the dream and he offers her to sleep in his bed, then you have to write the rest of the story also don't write this word for word cha he it up and put it in different chapters and stuff