@moderndaywriter I found your writing absolutely beautiful! The structure is good, the rhyming is amazing (that is something I struggle immensely with), your use of extensive vocabulary is really impressive and I found quite a lot of the metaphors quite beautiful :). With "A Depressed Poet" I could relate a lot as I had struggled with depression and anxiety as well as certain eating disorders and self harm so, a lot of these actually showed what I was feeling when I didn't know what words to describe it so thank you for that :), they were tragically beautiful. "Poems for the Heart" I found quite 'aesthetically' pleasing and they made me quite happy, the messages were good and overall I just love all of them. You are a really good poet so please keep on writing! Also keep trying to get through whatever you're going through because even though it sounds cliché, it does get better. Use me as an example. Can't wait to see what other things you have in store!
- Georgia :P
