themuffinman905

I know my chapters have been kinda short so I'm gonna try to make them longer, somewhere around 2500 to 3000 words as a new target for each chapter. Onyx is gonna keep being a lil purring furball in the next one and I'm gonna drop a few subtle hints at the villain that's gonna make himself known later in the story. And once again I'm going to ask for you guys to help me and let me know if there's any problems each time I post a new chapter.

themuffinman905

@notreallyafan15 I was just reading through my previous chapters and noticed how quickly I got through them, so I'm doubling the word count.
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notreallyafan15

I try to keep my chapters below 3500 too… I dunno why, seems like a good number. About a 20 min read. Looking forward to it!
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themuffinman905

I know my chapters have been kinda short so I'm gonna try to make them longer, somewhere around 2500 to 3000 words as a new target for each chapter. Onyx is gonna keep being a lil purring furball in the next one and I'm gonna drop a few subtle hints at the villain that's gonna make himself known later in the story. And once again I'm going to ask for you guys to help me and let me know if there's any problems each time I post a new chapter.

themuffinman905

@notreallyafan15 I was just reading through my previous chapters and noticed how quickly I got through them, so I'm doubling the word count.
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notreallyafan15

I try to keep my chapters below 3500 too… I dunno why, seems like a good number. About a 20 min read. Looking forward to it!
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themuffinman905

Ok I've said that I was going to make an original villain who refers to himself as the king of chaos and I still am but It's gonna be in a different story from the prototype because he wouldn't fit super well with that story.  there's gonna be something a little different with the prototype. By the way if you have an idea for a story but don't have time to write it, I can take requests if it's a decent enough plot for me to put time into writing.

notreallyafan15

@themuffinman905 waiting  for it ! I’m ready to see some pain but also nuuuu leave Onyx alone he’s a good dude
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themuffinman905

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@notreallyafan15  oh by the way the scenario I drew up as a later part of the prototype story was just off the top of my head of what he could do, not what he actually would do. I was just giving you an idea of the sadistic and manipulative asshole lord X is gonna be. bro is a legendary hater, he will not give Onyx a fucking happy ending.
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notreallyafan15

@themuffinman905 oooo gotta check that out
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themuffinman905

If there are any recurring problems in my story or if I have any bad writing habits, I want y'all to let me know. By the way, new chapter tomorrow.

themuffinman905

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@notreallyafan15 Next chapter gonna be wholesome as fuck.
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notreallyafan15

Roger that !
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notreallyafan15

Hey can you let me know if you can still see my story? I feel like it offended someone and they may have taken it down </3

notreallyafan15

Well I guess it’s still there! I bumped up the rating just in case. Still puzzled why it offended someone (well I mean there’s probably a million things but it’s a sonic story come on hahaha)
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themuffinman905

Over the next few days, I'm gonna do a little editing and improving to the chapters I've already made. They aren't going to be full on remakes like the first chapter but I'm just gonna improve on them a little bit

notreallyafan15

Awesome ! The first chapter remake was super good, night and day. I look forward to this
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notreallyafan15

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Just bought the comics on Amazon LOL. Dude I did it just so I can make sure I’m still writing shit that’s current and relevant … I’m a little scared to read it, don’t even know why LOL. But imma do it

themuffinman905

@notreallyafan15 Bringing neo metal sonic back was one of my favorite things that they did.
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notreallyafan15

Finished volume 1 :) I liked it a lot. The references to the crush 40 lyrics for neo metal sonic haha *chefs kiss* very well done
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themuffinman905

@notreallyafan15  They bring a bunch of old characters back into relevance, and the new characters are cool too.
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themuffinman905

Do ya'll think I should change the first chapter of "The prototype" and fix it up or should I just leave it as it is? Because I kind of want to keep it bad so I can look back on it and see how I started out as a writer

themuffinman905

@notreallyafan15 I'm willing to bet that people stopped reading before they got to the decently written parts because of that awful start. I compared the first and second chapters and if I wasn't the writer I'd think they were written by 2 different people.
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notreallyafan15

@themuffinman905 awesome ! I think that’s a good call. Can’t wait to read what happens next
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themuffinman905

@notreallyafan15 I've started the rework of the first chapter and it should be out tomorrow as well as a new chapter "A new mission"
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notreallyafan15

Hey! Random post of gratitude for your comments on my stories. I think its because of the comments that I got motivated to finish my Vegas story and start my new one...which has turned out to be my longest story ever lol. Gonna schedule the posting of the chapters as soon as I get pics for them all

themuffinman905

@notreallyafan15 You're a good writer and that's something I can appreciate. Whenever I post a chapter of my story I'm always waiting for that notification to show me that you read it. If I didn't read your stories my  chapters would all be just as bad as the first one.
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