Phoenix

@khyathivarma thank you so much. and i am sorry that i didn't give any attention to the story but its sure that i am going to update it and i have already prepared the draft for next two chapters but due to my studies and exams i am not getting time for it. just hoping to get a free time as my exam ends next week.

@JamesG4briel Thankyou for recommending. i will definitely go through it.

Wow...that's great...with some changes you can probably make it...just keep in mind, you are a great writer...i wish you all the best for it

Hey thanks for the honest response. i treasure these comments, which certainly improves my writing..
            And i too feel that i could have written the initial part of the story in a very realistic way. Though i started writing tentatively, was certainly not experienced at that time. I am already correcting and editing the initial story line. As i am contesting in #YourStoryIndia i want to make the story, a real deal. :)

Thank you for recommending it....i enjoyed it and you are indeed a wonderful writer but your description of emotion was not enough to catch my heart...it seemed so farfetched..plz take my comment as a way so that you can improve more...but i can say that you are indeed a wonderful writer and i loved your concept and the suspense and thrill...i cant deny it... Thank you again for recommending it