Author_Anvi

Hello everyone and the author. I am a new author writing a slow burn romance where they will have to surpass all the hurdles to stay and love each other. Kindly support, vote and comment.
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/409539234?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=Author_Anvi

Author_Anvi

@Author_Anvi sure.. do read comment and vote. Will do the same
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Igreat2

@Author_Anvi wanna support each other?
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Author_Anvi

@Igreat2 already done dear. You also do the same. Pls read story and review too with votes
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Author_Anvi

Di ur story is so so good and refreshing.
          Di i just have one doubt could u and other readers pls say it whether we readers of a particular book are wrong or not.
          1stly we did not know the insta id of author where she provide spoiler of the book. From spoilers the main leads are getting separated and remarried to another leads of the story. ML has restraint always controlled over emotions and family trubulence but FL shows concern observes but somewhat could not express she is bubbly,naive and ignorance is bliss types. Then with the plots of enemity of mother with FL family she plots and there ML seeks help from psychiatrist who understands him now emotional infedility come and they got divorced so that character developed like this. They have twins in the book before social marriage.
          We readers want to re edit the story so that they should give second chance to each other. We readers have given so many narratives and ideas but she is admanant. 
          What would you do if you face such situation?
          Pls readers and author reply genuinely because i am losing my mind here and honestly it really feels like author is ziddi here.  We say do separate divorce but no emotional infedility. Remarry them to each other so that second chance can be given to them not to remarry with other ML and FL

thepinklove

@JANNNNIIIOOO I really don't know how to respond to that , Because maybe I would never write a story like you mentioned, And just if we assume that I wrote the story with the plot you mentioned maybe I'll of course consider readers'opinions for sure  So this is my perspective ☺️
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Author_Anvi

@thepinklove di i respect it but if we readers urges you to change the end for the goodness will you do that for us or do the things that you want to do?
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thepinklove

@JANNNNIIIOOO Hi Cutiee  I'm so happy that you liked my story ☺️ thank you so much for giving it a chance. And keep supporting the story ☺️.
            
            And as for the book you're reading/ talking about , yes , maybe as readers we feel like giving second chance the leads will be best and maybe the story will perfect after they both get back . And the emotional infedilty with the other person how is not his wife will of course affect the readers , like as readers we may hate it because as usual we want like at last ML and FL together story only right not any other person . But like if we think in the author's perspective maybe she wants to tell a story like these things are generally happening nowadays or maybe she wants her story to be like that . So we have to understand she prespective also . So I think it is like this . I don't know if I'm making any sense or not but yeah I feel every story is different .
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Maireadnimagination

Hey, I just wanted to say I really enjoyed reading your work. You’ve got a lovely way of building the scene and it’s clear you have a natural storytelling instinct. It kept me interested and I could feel the effort you’ve put into shaping the narrative — great job on that.
          
          One small suggestion that might make it even stronger: you could try adding a bit more dialogue between the characters. Sometimes when characters speak more, it makes the story feel more alive and helps readers connect with them better. Also, exploring the emotions a little deeper in certain moments could make those scenes even more impactful.
          
          But overall, you’re definitely doing a great job. Keep writing and experimenting — your voice as a writer is already coming through nicely.
          Love 
          Mihii

thepinklove

@Maireadnimagination thank you  lot's of loveeeeeeeee ☺️
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Maireadnimagination

It's my pleasure sweetheart 
            Hope u are happy and healthy..
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thepinklove

@Maireadnimagination hii mihii , thank you so much for the message it means a lot to me  I'm so so glad  that you enjoyed reading my story ☺️ . And thank you so much for the suggestions you gave  I'll try my best make the story more impactful  I'm feeling very very happy right now that like my writings ☺️ thank you again for the message, Keep supporting the story ☺️ lot's of loveeeeeeeee to you
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shadowedlotus

Hey there!
          Totally sorry if this is out of the blue—I don’t know if you’re accepting reading requests right now, but I’d love it if you gave my book a chance. 
          
          If you enjoy it (even a little!), feel free to drop a like—and don’t hold back in the comments. Your thoughts and opinions truly matter, and I’d love to hear them! ✨
          
          Thank you so much for your time, and sorry for barging in like a surprise plot twist. 
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/406323436?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=shadowedlotus