theprodigypenguin

I'm gonna put up a question box on my Instagram "no_white_knights" where I keep all my series facts and character commissions, so if you have any burning questions or concerns feel free to shoot me a question on insta and I'll answer them later <3 currently I'm half done with chapter four, outlining the rewrite of WHIV, and taking a break to play a game.

theprodigypenguin

To clarify, I meant questions or concerns about the rewrite, lmao XD
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OrangeDaffodilia

Author can you please in the rewrite of Puppet make it so that when Kailas and Dakota sleep together he’s of age cause it’s making it hard for me to continue but I’m trying to push through cause I really like the book. The fact that he slept with him when he was 17 is unsettling to me the plot would’ve been the same if he was 18 but this is just a suggestion and please do take it into consideration.

OrangeDaffodilia

@theprodigypenguin Thank you for that. I'm definitely gonna read the rewrite because of how much work you're probably putting into it. Also thank you for finding time to write with your busy work schedule.
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theprodigypenguin

@CornetReverie I'm changing a LOT in the rewrite, though admittedly I haven't been able to work on it in a while since I have a full time job that leaves no room for my hobbies (plz end me). No but back when I wrote this story the first time younger me added a ton of dead dove do not eat stuff, I think cuz writing it made me feel more in control of stuff going on in my actual day to day life. I'm not adding all that mess to the rewrite.
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theprodigypenguin

@CornetReverie Oh babe they don't sleep together at ALL in the rewrite. I'm taking that out completely. Kailas is more like a brother to him, that makes more sense to me.
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Ri_Nayu

Hello Amelia-san just trying, but I've been trying to look for the The Hyacinth Prophecy to read it again but I couldn't find it anymore, that book is really precious to me and I want to somehow re-read it after years of finishing it~ I'm so sorry for suddenly messaging, but did you post it somewhere, anywhere where i could re-read it again?~

theprodigypenguin

I'm gonna put up a question box on my Instagram "no_white_knights" where I keep all my series facts and character commissions, so if you have any burning questions or concerns feel free to shoot me a question on insta and I'll answer them later <3 currently I'm half done with chapter four, outlining the rewrite of WHIV, and taking a break to play a game.

theprodigypenguin

To clarify, I meant questions or concerns about the rewrite, lmao XD
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theprodigypenguin

Raise your hand if you think Bryn should have some kind of relationship with his mother as an adult. I don't like how I made him full on yeet no contact, cuz she was a good ma all things considered, and he was a mamas boy, and the way I write Bryn I feel like he'd try to take care of her if he could, yknow?

bubblegumtea04

@theprodigypenguin YES please! We need more Bryn!
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Ammy2021story

@theprodigypenguin I would like to read that too !!!!!
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theprodigypenguin

Kat would be so excited if Bryn brought home a boyfriend omg.
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theprodigypenguin

Another neat addition to the rewrites is that Carter's mother has a maiden name that's mentioned because she's dead but still plays an important role in WHIV. Also I'm bringing back the former Syndicate leader so we're gonna find out what happened to that jackass too and learn how Tobias took over the Vienna streets ʘ‿ʘ

theprodigypenguin

Chapter 4 of the rewrite technically clashes with the rewrite of WHIV, so to tide me over for fluffy romance maybe I'll work on that at the same time. It IS shorter than the rewrite after all. Would you guys believe me if I told you the rewrite if Carter and Tobias' first meeting is going to be a hundred times fluffier than before? Partly because Carter doesn't get blown up lmao. I'm really cutting back on the violence in the rewrites.

wulverorcus

Is it more fluffy than Carter holding Demi while he cried bc OWIE
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