thequietpenn_

Hello everyone!
          	
          	Chapter 53 is out now!
          	
          	Do read, vote and share your thoughts in the comments.
          	
          	Happy reading.

kiki257

I have maladaptive daydreaming, so I have multiple imaginary scenarios in my head. It includes meher and vardhaan too. I get tons of ideas in my head about them and some cute scenes too. I am not asking you to write it. I really am not.  I can write it myself for me but i just have a feeling of sharing it sometimes too. So would it be okay, if i write some of those scenes here ? It would be small and cute scenes, just for fun. Nothing else. It would also help to improve myself. I need your permission to do so though. It doesn't have to be Cannon at all. 

thequietpenn_

Sure.. you can. I dont have any problem with it. 
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kiki257

Thank you for replying, I guess. Uh..I didn't expect you to reply.  
          
          Anyways, why does aryan call his sister by 'tu' ? Isn't she older than him by 2 years , i think?  He should address her by at least 'tum' right  or is it just me? It just feels odd to me to read that , I guess. Well, I also address my sister by 'tu' only but we have  11 months of age gap only , so i don't think I should judge. It's just my first time reading a novel where the younger one actually addresses the older one like that. Just asking, author. Not criticizing anything. I was just curious, nothing else. It was just a question that I had.  Also as a author who do you ship the most? Okay, forget about as a author but just as in general who do you ship ? Like if someone tells you about this story , who would you ship ? Not asking for spoilers , author!!! Just wanted to know that as a normal reader who would you ship. 
          
          

thequietpenn_

Because, My brother is four years younger than mee and he still calls me “tu.” Even a lot of my friends and cousins do the same, so i just naturally used it in the story
            
            And about which couple I ship… please, I don’t want to tell you that. I feel like it would ruin the reading experience for you, especially with this story. So I’m going to keep that one to myself.  I am so sorry 😭
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thequietpenn_

@akshara_0101 I am trying.. (crying emoji)  Who would be happier than me if Viraj became famous on Wattpad? 😭 But Viraj’s Pov is really important because it will show what he feels about Meher and Kuhu. His Pov will come in the upcoming chapters and after that, you will get to explore his character much more deeply.
          
          But thank you for loving Viraj and seeing the potential in him.

kiki257

Anyways, you may think I am a psycho, which i kinda am for writing so much for a character. Being too invested in this and that  character. Writing such a long message when I don't even know if you will reply. Also making up a broken scene from something i just imagine. I am a psycho. But it's needed. Sorry if you feel offended by this but meher cannot always be just a quiet, introverted girl. The readers need her to be more than just that. This is my honest review. It's honestly something that she needs. She needs it. She needs to have her thing. Something that screams her. Also the photography thing was something i came up like now , so don't have to make that her passion but something else you find more suitable for her.
          
          I don't think it would be odd to introduce her passion too,if you had that thought.
          
          This is an advice and also a review.
          Hope no hard feelings.

thequietpenn_

@twinklenaina I totally understand what you mean and honestly, there is so much of Viraj’s character that is still left to explore. His POVs are actually some of the most important parts of the story because they show what he truly feels about Meher and what is really going on in his mind when it comes to Kuhu.
            
            A lot of things about Viraj will only make sense once his POVs are properly revealed. I don’t want to explain too much right now because it would spoil the story, but once you get to those parts, I think you will understand why I’ve written his character the way I have and why his journey needs time. His character will get proper closure through those moments. 
            
            And there is SO much still left to come in this story. 😭❤️ I am really glad you’re seeing the potential in Viraj already, though. Keep reading.. you’ll have to wait for his side of the story to unfold.
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twinklenaina

@kiki257 Author ji, among the 4 main leads I feel Viraj is the one who gets the least attention!! His character has SO much potential but his story mostly revolves around the bet and I feel there’s so much more to him than that. He’s such a practical and grounded person which honestly makes him more relatable because he feels like an actual person. I really hope we get to see more of his character and his side of the story because he genuinely has the potential to become one of the most loved characters here ❤️
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thequietpenn_

@kiki257 NO ...Not  at all! In fact, i really appreciate how much thought you’ve put into understanding Meher’s character. Thank you so much for such a thoughtful review and for loving Meher this much...  I genuinely loved reading everything you wrote about her.
            
            But… you will have to wait for the future chapters to see what i have planned for Meher. 👀 I cant say much without giving away things, but i definitely want you to keep reading and see how her character grows. Maybe you will get to see the side of Meher you’re hoping for....
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kiki257

Also an introvert could talk about a thing they love for hours. Maybe this could be one for her. Like her and vardhaan first proper conversation could include the topic of photography.
          
          "Why are you looking at me like that" meher raised her eyebrows, her eyes filled with confusion.  Vardhaan was staring at her like he had seen a miracle happened. "You talked for 20 minutes straight to me alone." He stated. Meher didn't knew what to say now. So she simply looked away , slightly embarrassed too. Vardhaan just let out a soft chuckle seeing her reaction.  He found it cute. Meher  puffed her cheeks and looked away seeing his reaction.  "Do you wanna see some photos I took by myself?" Vardhaan asked her softly.  That got her attention. She looked at him and nodded. Vardhaan pulled out his phone and Opened the gallery app. Meher leaned closer to his side to get the better view, their arms brushing now. He didn't made any comments on that , just smiled.  There weren't many photos, even the ones that were there were laughable type of photos.  He gave her the phone to look for herself.  She hesitated for a minute then took it after he assured her.  She was just scrolling through the photos. The gallery wasn't like her's.  She scrolled and founds a photo that makes her laugh. Author you think from here on out.
          
          

kiki257

I guess, i just want her to feel that too. There is nothing wrong with being average except it's quite normal but so is having a passion.  There could be so many things for meher that she could be passionate about , from that even one is more than enough.  Like..uh photography could be one. She loves to take pictures of things so that could be one. The pictures don't have to be exceptionally good, they can be messy and all. She doesn't stop taking pictures cause she loves to and wouldn't stop.
          
          
          

kiki257

You can take me for example. I have two passion. One is listening to music and other is writing fanfiction for myself only.  The people who knows me know the love that i have for music. I can't imagine my life without it. It's something that makes me feel alive , Happy, sad , excited every emotions i could feel. I feel like this is something that belongs to me. Like this is my thing. I have headphones in my ears since dawn till evening, i have them in as I type.  My family and friends know about this passion, they would talk about or tease me about this thing.  But I love every part of it cause what do you mean some people can go a day without listening to Taylor Swift and Olivia Rodrigo?!
          
          The second is writing fanfiction.  Writing fanfiction for myself is my another passion.  I am not a good writer, I'll tell you the truth.  I make so many grammatically mistakes. I suck at describing things. Sometimes I feel like I have the greatest idea anyone has ever had but I don't know how to put it into words. I stuck there. There are days where I won't be able to write something that satisfies me. I also repeat words too many times cause my vocabulary isn't that good.  I read novels to educate myself on how to write for myself properly. This one is one of them.  I learnt a few things, so thanks for that.  Even after all this , i don't want to stop writing. I love doing it. I am not perfect at all , I make mistakes but i still want to do it . I just loves doing it so much , I guess.  It makes feel good to read the dialogues i wrote. Also if by chance i wrote a really good scene I feel really good then. That feeling is unexplainable.
          
          
          

kiki257

Hey author new reader here! The story is really interesting and i love how it is not something we readers can  predict easily.  This is my review or an advice for a meher's character. From the story I am able to sum up that she is an introvert and also has social anxiety too.  She is an average person, something many people can relate to. Not everyone has some special talent or are born toppers from their mother's womb.  
          
          She is academically average. Socially awkward and quiet. Gets embarrassed easily. She doesn't like being the centre of attention and sometimes prefers to be alone. Enjoys her own company. That's over all I have made up what her character is like and that's realistic. There are many people like her I am one of them. That's why i guess I look forward to reading her part the most.  
          
          This is a review with a criticism of her character, author. Uh... Meher is quite a realistic character although she doesn't have something that solely belongs to her , only her.  I am not talking about something special talent or being a topper but a passion. You know,  being passionate about something that even though you are bad at it you still want to do it cause it makes you feel alive and happy.  There is a different between a passion and a talent. I want meher to have a passion not a talent. Not everyone has a talent but everyone do have a passion for something.  We are and also the characters in the book are perceiving meher as some quiet, introvert girl which she is,nothing wrong with that.  But I want to see a side of meher where you know she is genuinely happy doing something she isn't good at but cause she wants to.  Something that she feels confident in and i think many readers like me would enjoy seeing that side of her.