Robertjohnnie1964

The city of lights and murders needs lots of editing.  So many grammatical mistakes in the first chapter almost 100. Hard to read a  book that you are correcting the mistakes as you read it.  Good story line though.  Give you credit for that.  

thereadersapprentice

@Robertjohnnie1964 Thank you! Yes, i still struggle with my grammar. I'll do my best to fix it. Thanks again!
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