Robertjohnnie1964 Apr 28, 2017 Report CommentLink to CommentCode of ConductWattpad Safety Portal Gave up after chapter 5. Sorry just could not stand to read or try to read any more. MISERABLE !!!!! View 0 more replies
Robertjohnnie1964 Apr 28, 2017 Report CommentLink to CommentCode of ConductWattpad Safety Portal The city of lights and murders needs lots of editing. So many grammatical mistakes in the first chapter almost 100. Hard to read a book that you are correcting the mistakes as you read it. Good story line though. Give you credit for that. View 1 more reply thereadersapprentice @Robertjohnnie1964 Thank you! Yes, i still struggle with my grammar. I'll do my best to fix it. Thanks again! Apr 28, 2017 • Reply Report CommentLink to CommentCode of ConductWattpad Safety Portal