@the_bisexual_stag A Submit Your Own Character story you applied for three months ago. (There have been plenty of delays, but the story has finally been released ^^;)
Thanks a lot for the comments! They really helped. It has improved my chapter a lot. In the future I'll think a lot more of including facial expressions. ^^
@the_bisexual_stag A Submit Your Own Character story you applied for three months ago. (There have been plenty of delays, but the story has finally been released ^^;)
Thank you for commenting my book, "Trip Down Memory Lane". The critique you gave me really helped.
I still have problems in regards to tense confusions since this is my first book I've published, and I'm glad that you've pointed it out.
I will edit and revise my work in later date...