Becky

The next chapter will probably be up in the next couple of days

Hey thanks
          Yeah I had some trouble with the character descriptions but I want to make sure that readers know what the chapters look like to give them an idea of what they are supposed to look like, because I find it annoying when you are never given a description of a character so you just have to make it up.
          And about the thing with Maddy and Ben, don't you worry I've got a wonderful plot twist lined up.
          Thanks again

Umm probs tomorrow or the day after I've got tons of time to write at the mo so the next chapter will be posted sooner than usual