Alien in a Spacesuit

So I redesigned my book a bit and restarted from msotly scratch? Kinda taking from wuxia a bit and honstly its probably a hit mess, buttt it may be good its up to you folks on your opinion and i respect them so if you red and like it feel free to leave criticism and even invite a friend to criticise itd be helpful.

So im getting back to the kinda bad book didnt plan it out or nothing but its kinda just for fun nothing too seriosu but expect another somepojnt in the next yesr to be started.

Hi