Liz_Plum

Hey! I see that you're an author and I just read your story, and I was hoping that maybe you could return the favor and check out my story "Silently Falling." 
          I didn't read your story just to promote mine, I was genuinely interested in it, but I also figured maybe you could check my story out as well to get some tips? My entire first chapter basically explains who the characters are, and I don't get much into the plot until the 3rd or 4th chapter. 
          
          Keep up the good work :)

theultimateloser

Hey thanks! I absolutely LOVE the first few chapter of your story! Maybe as a tip, have some suspense to keep your readers on edge so they are hungry for more! I do that to keep my readers interested. :) Keep on writing!! ^_^
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