Hey, tried to check out your story. You need to make sure its properly broken up into correct paragraphs. I lot of your book looks like one big mumbo jumbo.
@jpsuchecki I appreciate the feedback. I don't usually write it on wattpad, and I didn't know to check for that because the pasting doesn't disturb the paragraphs on royal road, but I'll go back to the previous chapters and try space them out correctly.
Life got in the way, but I'm finally back with a new series. I've learnt my lessons, so I have enough chapter backlog to ensure I never miss an update again. It's good to be back and I hope you guys check it out.
https://www.wattpad.com/story/366418112