thewayilovebooks

There's new chapter up guys. Enjoy
          	I just published "chapter nine" of my story "Galderon Chronicles: Emergence ". https://www.wattpad.com/1439104570?utm_source=android&utm_medium=profile&utm_content=share_published&wp_page=create_on_publish&wp_uname=thewayilovebooks

jpsuchecki

Hey, tried to check out your story. You need to make sure its properly broken up into correct paragraphs. I lot of your book looks like one big mumbo jumbo.

thewayilovebooks

@jpsuchecki I appreciate the feedback. I don't usually write it on wattpad, and I didn't know to check for that because the pasting doesn't disturb the paragraphs on royal road, but I'll go back to the previous chapters and try space them out correctly. 
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