Hi, so a few late nights, and I completed "The Royal Veins". All I want to ask is...what is wrong with you?
Who writes like this?
It was one hell of a ride. I felt so many emotions throughout the whole story. It's been a hot minute since a book on Wattpad had me hooked like this, and to say I am pleased would be an understatement.
I LOVED the plot. The way you smoothly tied all the strings together by the end was so satisfying to read.
I would say that descriptive writing is one of your specialties. Your narration sets the thrill so good. Like, I genuinely got scared during the last parts when Isha was getting stalked, and we didn't know it was Nayantra cuz red saree, a crazy look...dude! Who is it? Stop creeping me out, lol.
Though I would suggest refining your writing a tad bit more as you learn. The more concise a sentence is, the better.
Anyway.
When Vikram stood between her and his children? Girl, you had me motivated at 4 in the morning, like what?
The characters arcs were quite good too. Most of the thought process resembled an actual human's. It felt real, natural.
I'm so proud of you, and I don't even know you. Keep it up! You've got a long, good, and beautiful journey ahead with a talent like that♡