thewriter89
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Heyoo everyone!
It's just a general question based on your opinion on my story, 'Innings of Heart'. Getting through few reviews, I realised something off.
Isn't the story going bit dramatic, unrealistic, and like daily soaps. Or you guys feel that the love between Harman-Smriti is immature, dramatic, weak or bit odd, either they lack trust like something.
Because I really don't want my story potraying Harmandhana love as something unrealistic and weak. I expect to showcast them with different twists like Harman's past, Sahuri and somewhat Smriti's past too.
1. The Nupur angle, it wasn't supposed to be Harman and Smriti lacking trust but a phase when someone third enter a couple. And Nupur was Harman's childhood bestfriend so it was easy to manipulate, but not supposed to be shown Harry is immature or distrusts Smriti. Also, a concept when miscommunication happens between a couple. The eight months of seperation , maintaining boundaries where Harman was struggling as captain, cricketer, mother, Dsp and partner.
2.The WPL. That was when Smriti thinks of Harman as rival not as wife, also, an arc where they struggle maintaining professionalism as rivals after being wives as captain and vice captain. Again, a lack of communication.
3.The pregnancy arc, it's just a distinct perception of Harman-Smriti on family planning and it's normal in between couples.
4.The 'A century....' that chapter was meant to show how they supported eachother in the worst times.
I hope you review hlw you saw these arcs and tracks, no love can ever be properly fully mature some things go disapproved and opposite ways. But, honestly I don't wanna show HarmanDhana as fool couple of weakened with fragile love.
I want to keep them loving, cute and mature as couple.
thewriter89
Heyoo everyone!
It's just a general question based on your opinion on my story, 'Innings of Heart'. Getting through few reviews, I realised something off.
Isn't the story going bit dramatic, unrealistic, and like daily soaps. Or you guys feel that the love between Harman-Smriti is immature, dramatic, weak or bit odd, either they lack trust like something.
Because I really don't want my story potraying Harmandhana love as something unrealistic and weak. I expect to showcast them with different twists like Harman's past, Sahuri and somewhat Smriti's past too.
1. The Nupur angle, it wasn't supposed to be Harman and Smriti lacking trust but a phase when someone third enter a couple. And Nupur was Harman's childhood bestfriend so it was easy to manipulate, but not supposed to be shown Harry is immature or distrusts Smriti. Also, a concept when miscommunication happens between a couple. The eight months of seperation , maintaining boundaries where Harman was struggling as captain, cricketer, mother, Dsp and partner.
2.The WPL. That was when Smriti thinks of Harman as rival not as wife, also, an arc where they struggle maintaining professionalism as rivals after being wives as captain and vice captain. Again, a lack of communication.
3.The pregnancy arc, it's just a distinct perception of Harman-Smriti on family planning and it's normal in between couples.
4.The 'A century....' that chapter was meant to show how they supported eachother in the worst times.
I hope you review hlw you saw these arcs and tracks, no love can ever be properly fully mature some things go disapproved and opposite ways. But, honestly I don't wanna show HarmanDhana as fool couple of weakened with fragile love.
I want to keep them loving, cute and mature as couple.
Shyaaam
Like harry is pregnant bit smriti doesn't know like indian tv drama it will fun
KritiAggarwal3
@Shyaaam no yaar it will be traumatizing ... They are cute couple they should be like that only little fight is fine ...
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Shyaaam
Author don't end the story you can extend the story by leap and smriti and harry are apart then how they meet
thewriter89
@Shyaaam sorry for the late reply! But I won't get any seperation track as I don't want it to be dramatic like daily soaps
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thewriter89
Sorry.....but now, next update would be on 18th March as one month is left for my boards. I literally announced my break twice but couldn't take it due to your love and comments on my stories; but now I've to be serious.
I'm finally leaving, would meet you in March.
Bass iss author ko bhul matt jana guys and after I return bring back your same love, hites and comments.
Finally, Signing off.........
~Mridulaa.
KAREENAX2009
@thewriter89 will definitely miss you a lot but all the very best! Slay your examinationsss ~will wait for you
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yttukhgtyo
Best of luckkkkk you will do greatttt we will be waiting for you with the very same enthusiasm
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Shraddha193
Next chapter.... please
thewriter89
This announcement is to make you all know that @poojatt , the author of Harmandhana Story , Stadium and Lights is not able to update as her Wattpad isn't working but she'll soon return thrilling all of you readers with her updates. Thank-you...
delulumehhh
Itss totally finee author all the besttt !!!✨✨
yttukhgtyo
It’s okay we understand all the best you will do great on your exams
thewriter89
Hey...!!
It's your Harmandhana writer , this announcement is to inform you all that till 31st December you won't be getting frequent updates as I'm tied up with my tests and studies .
And the whole month of January , February and first two weeks of March there'll be no updates of any of my stories as I'm having my tenth prelims followed by internals and SSC boards .
Because of my academics , it is not possible to give updates , so this month will be last month of me updating . Then , temporarily I'll be pausing Wattpad for two and half months .
But , I promise to return and then give three updates a day from the last day of my exams . From March , there'll be frequent and regular updates without any compromise .
I express my gratitude to all the readers and followers who kept commenting , supporting and motivating me to pen down . You all were very adorable and best as readers . I thank all those who voted , commented . Thank youuu✨
I'll return soon and give you updates , till then wishing you all good days
~thewriter_89
poojaat567
@thewriter89 dungi dungi aajj nahi toh kal pakka don't worry insta bhi dekhlena okkkk
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thewriter89
@poojaat567 awwww !!! Bhaii you're the sweetest senior and elder sister.... thankyou so so muchhhhh.. Bass jaane se pehle aap update de denaaa
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poojaat567
@thewriter89 Oiii my exam warrior Just popping in to say ALL THE BEST for your exams Go in, write like a menace, confuse the questions before they confuse you, and come back victorious ✨ Don’t overthink, don’t panic — you’ve got a good brain and an even better vibe. Eat properly, sleep (I know you won’t but still), and remember exams are temporary, legends are permanent I’ll be right here cheering for you like an overexcited elder sister with zero chill. Now go slay, kiddo
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