@Bobby_Brincis Hey dear! I read the first published part of your book..
The story plot seems intriguing and amazing..its appreciatable because of the different essence and role of each character. The bond among the Kaur siblings seems chaotic and supportive typical...so, you can highlight it and kind of make "incorrect quotes" dialogues between them. Harman’s character is again strong abd independent but I'll suggest you to skip the "tom-boyish" essence to Harry's character as she isnt really is...go for strong independent woman thing.
Also, put a decent gap between each paragraph, each dialogues so it looks presentable and fascinates readers to read. Also, make use of the font type ( bold, italics , underlined ) so, it appears as of a real book thing.
Probably, Smriti would be the love interest.
So, here you can show. Either of them is bit messy with life as of problems, past and family, usually it's Harman. But, you can go like both have a past and yet balance eachother...and falls.
I suggest you not to portray any of them as masculine. Because, bruhh both of them are women, and probably in story, they're not straight, they don't need men, so why to show tomboy or masculinity when in reality they both are feminine. That would really make an impact as most of the writers show Harman as a "tomboy" "masculine" ...don't go for that.
I'll be helping and backing you, just reach me out.
All the best for writings♡....surely, you'll be doing the best..just enjoy being an author and your own writings;)
Welcome dear<3
