theylovebby
im kind of reworking the chapters to make them longer. i keep rereading and i keep finding stuff i want to change/fix
theylovebby
but im going to try and work on making the chapters longer, speak in more of an active voice, and work on the dialogue between characters, and js stuff to fix before i post on a03
theylovebby
i started writing pwp when i was a sophomore in high school and there’s just so much that could be better — now that i’ve taken college english classes yk