Storiesbyally

Can you check out my story please? It is my second book but I would call it my first book because I put so much effort to write it. 
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/410256909?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create&wp_uname=Allyiskrazy

Storiesbyally

@Allyiskrazy Thank you so much!
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thickpinky

@Allyiskrazy I actually like it, it's different
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shanwrites4uu

Hey love, could you check out my book and tell me what you think, I need another perspective to tell me if i should continue it☺. Love Me From Behind

shanwrites4uu

@shanwrites4uu Thank you☺.
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thickpinky

@shanwrites4uu I checked it out, I think I need alot of improvement, no shade. It needs better grammar, context and a better introduction of the characters. And it needs to be way longer.
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