Tinne_Peeters
Hallo!
Sylke is mijn zus, door haar heb ik je boek over falcao leren kennen....het is echt goed!
thijskersten9
cumcakerats
he wil je mijn boek lesen xx
LordBaioen
Ha hoi
thijskersten9
Mijn account deed het een tijd niet maar nu ga ik weer veel updaten!
survalio10
Haiiii thijs,
Hoe gaat het?
Lang niet gesproken!
Doeggg,
~Survalio10
thijskersten9
Ik heb mijn herschreven verhaal ook op dit account gezet. Ik ga door met de account waar het meest op wordt gelezen!
thijskersten9
I am going to put what I have rewritten of my book online in January 2016.
The storyline of Falcao is official, just as Lothar, Elissa and one more I created.
Rasmend Otheras is brother of Lothar, and the only one who sees that if his brother continues like this his Empire will perish and the darkness will devour them all.
For that he must get his hand on the throne. He has the claim, titles, lands and vazals but now he needs his people to see that he is doing good,
thijskersten9
Okay so today I started really rewriting my book and I already wrote 9 a4 pages. It now follows three major storylines.
Falcao Redwood, who just as usual fights her adventure to defeat the Great Shadow.
Lothar Othras, king of the R'lenian empire who and his lords are struggling to find a way to defeat the coming of this Shadow.
Elissa, a queen of a dead bloodline whom her brother tries to find an army, eventhough Elissa is the one that inspires people, the one who gets followers.
Do you think this would be a better story? With those three storylines?
avidreader2110
Is the story, "A Kingdom..." the translated version of your other book, or is it a new book?
avidreader2110
Well I believe it's quite interesting. Also, you are a really good writer, don't bother with others reactions or their lack thereof. I really like your book.
thijskersten9
@avidreader2110 It's a new book. I've curently finished the prologue, chapter one and half of chapter two but no one reacted so I never posted it
thijskersten9
Hallo. Ik ben lang niet online geweest en ik heb niet heel veel inspiratie voor mijn boek de laatste tijd. Ik ga binnenkort weer proberen om te schrijven aan het verhaal.
Ondertussen heb ik een Engels verhaal wat ik misschien ga posten. Ik zal binnenkort de proloog erop zetten en als jullie het leuk vinden ga ik hier mee door.
Met vriendelijke groet, Thijs Kersten