@FOBPatrickStumpTrash Aww its k. Everyone needs to take a break sometimes anyway. Dont worry about your stories, all authors styles vary from one chapter to another, depending on the mood. I know I look back on CMIYC, and I just *cringe attack*. You shouldnt, though. Your style is wonderfully well-developed, and although occasionally lacking in description, it is a realistically realized book, and frankly, I think it is one of the best of its type.