thomas334rrr

New chapter out of school love dose 
          	I just published "Chapter 3: rocky" of my story "School love dose". https://www.wattpad.com/1617609767?utm_source=android&utm_medium=profile&utm_content=share_published&wp_page=create_on_publish&wp_uname=thomas334rrr

flyingunicornz_

hi! saw your post on reddit regarding read for read, are you still down for it? :)

flyingunicornz_

@thomas334rrr hii! im done. lil feedback to help you: expand on the descriptions. eg, for your first sentence in the second paragraph. you try say smth like "george breathe slowly, afraid that he might catch the attention of an impending threat". 
            your idea has potential, i would love to read more. added to library :)
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flyingunicornz_

@thomas334rrr my book is And When She Blinks. yours?
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