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New chapter for Sailing Solo is up! Next week expect Percy Jackson; the SHEILD Agent
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I’ve got a few chapters up on my account for original works! Go check them out!
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Christmas Special on Warrior of the Hunt! Go check it out! Next week, I hope to have an edited chapter for Apollo’s Hunt. I think this is where things get changed up a bit so beware.
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What if I don’t want to “read to find out”?? What if I want to know exactly what I’m getting into before I commit myself?? What genre? What bandwagon plot line? What sub genre? Who? What? HOOK ME! Telling me to “read to find out” or giving me basically the plot opening for the canon story (especially with a bunch of questions “will so and so figure it out?” “What if so and so didn’t actually do this?”) is NOT gonna draw me in! Tell me the premise of what you did differently. Give me some bait so I take the hook so you can reel me in.
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You could be trying to give me a Star Wars story with the description of a Harry Potter book when I really wanted Percy Jackson. Then I’ll leave and never finish the story because I was disappointed. Or you could just be rewriting the canon story with only a minor difference and that difference has no affect on the characters choices whatsoever
Sup3rBae
@thornjinx23905 THIS. It's like seeing an ad for a new restaurant that doesn't mention what food it sells.
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Alright the new chapter for Warrior of the Hunt is up! I plan on having a Christmas chapter for WotH up by Tuesday or something. It might be up Thursday but it WILL be up next week!
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New chapter for Sailing Solo! Look out for Warrior of the Hunt today as well!
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New chapter for Jack Frost’s Beginning! It’s been too long! Next week should be an update on Sailing Solo. Keep an eye out
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Pet peeve with story descriptions: lots of questions(“what if…? What if…? What if…? Etc.”), and leaving out what makes your story different from all the other similar stories with the same plot opening.
Emrys1234
@thornjinx23905 Yeah, I can understand you there. It's quite annoying when I'm looking back trying to find out what the story I'm looking at is about without having to read it again
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So this week I have an edited chapter for Apollo’s Hunt. Next week I will have one for another story I haven’t worked on in FOREVER. Jack Frost’s Beginning. Unsure when I’ll have another chapter for it after this though.
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Percy Jackson; the SHEILD Agent has been updated! After a year and a half! By golly does that feel good! And we’re seeing more of what the ending is gonna look like in this chapter.
Sailing Solo is next week! Keep an eye out!