thoughtlesswonders

@DawnabcBatonbonker I have no negative feedback to give you. I personally enjoyed that story so much. I read it within a day, that including the fact that I had school so it was hard to read during that time. While reading your book, I felt my heart ache when your characters' heart ached. I found myself smiling when they did. If that alone doesn't tell you you're an astounding writer I don't know what will. One paper won't matter years from now when you've realized that you love what you do. If you love writing and you loved that paper you wrote, the  why should anything else matter? But I was too once a writer and everyone else's opinion do matter. So don't let one negative slip up get in your way, in fact, you should try to do it better. Show them what you're made of, on your next assignment give them a paper/story that they've never seen before. There's only one you in this world. So give them a story that only you can write. I've hoped I've been some what of a help, just if you ever feel bad or anything, let me know, I'm always here for you to talk to. No matter what the issue.

thoughtlesswonders

@DawnabcBatonbonker I have no negative feedback to give you. I personally enjoyed that story so much. I read it within a day, that including the fact that I had school so it was hard to read during that time. While reading your book, I felt my heart ache when your characters' heart ached. I found myself smiling when they did. If that alone doesn't tell you you're an astounding writer I don't know what will. One paper won't matter years from now when you've realized that you love what you do. If you love writing and you loved that paper you wrote, the  why should anything else matter? But I was too once a writer and everyone else's opinion do matter. So don't let one negative slip up get in your way, in fact, you should try to do it better. Show them what you're made of, on your next assignment give them a paper/story that they've never seen before. There's only one you in this world. So give them a story that only you can write. I've hoped I've been some what of a help, just if you ever feel bad or anything, let me know, I'm always here for you to talk to. No matter what the issue.

DawnabcBatonbonker

Hello love.
          So I am having a god awful day. Expecting a terrible grade in class and I gave that paper my best shot. Or so I thought.
          So thank you for reading to the very end of TSLaM. Tell me what you thought. I fish for critiques more than compliments. Tell me what you thought honestly.
          And thank you for following me. I am taking this as a sign for my being in this class. I joined here to write better. I know that I do it for you. For those who like my work and read it and follow me. Thank you for that. For your support.
          Keep reading! Maybe you'll find something else interesting.
          Dawn