@DawnabcBatonbonker I have no negative feedback to give you. I personally enjoyed that story so much. I read it within a day, that including the fact that I had school so it was hard to read during that time. While reading your book, I felt my heart ache when your characters' heart ached. I found myself smiling when they did. If that alone doesn't tell you you're an astounding writer I don't know what will. One paper won't matter years from now when you've realized that you love what you do. If you love writing and you loved that paper you wrote, the why should anything else matter? But I was too once a writer and everyone else's opinion do matter. So don't let one negative slip up get in your way, in fact, you should try to do it better. Show them what you're made of, on your next assignment give them a paper/story that they've never seen before. There's only one you in this world. So give them a story that only you can write. I've hoped I've been some what of a help, just if you ever feel bad or anything, let me know, I'm always here for you to talk to. No matter what the issue.