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Hello, I'm sorry for any inconveniences and disturbance this may cause but I'd love to ask if you could check out my book, "Bruised Affections". 
          
          It'll mean the world to me, thank you. 

Hey! How are you? I wrote a story called “When we all sin” and I thought it would be nice if you read it. It only has one chapter but I’m sure you’ll enjoy it. Here’s the link: https://my.w.tt/g3Wpx68JbY
          I’m from Argentina so tell me if I have any grammar or redaction mistakes.
          Thank you so much!!