thus_belladonna
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Hello everyone!
I’ve now revised and updated Tulip’s backstory in Chapter 9 on Belladonna. While the changes might not seem brutal the same as before, I have finally connect her story to her character properly and help fix the plot hole in her character.
I simplified it compared to before, less bizarre, less brutal, becasue I think that clear and proper plotting makes the story stronger.
The previous version was a bit too extreme, I know its a murder mystery and fictional, but I wanted to keep it more realistic in terms of how characters would actually react to events.
Belladonna is still a murder mystery, and violence is part of it, but I aimed for a cleaner, more psychological approach.
The story isn’t just about killing, it’s about the impact these events have on mental health and how trauma shapes a person.
I hope you enjoy it! It may not seem like a massive change, but I think it makes the story feel more grounded and impactful.
—W. Elise <33
thus_belladonna
@Enderend__ i'm glad you're satisfied with that, but I still don't think it was enough, i wrote in RUSH again but it made sense more yes— glad you commented about it being okay since you're one of t the people who comments somth about it (*つ´・∀・)つ
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Enderend__
@thus_belladonna Hi! Elise! I saw and have read the Chapter 09 it is way better and much tolerable. you are right it was not as brutal as it was the last time but it made more sense to the Character of Tulip. I think it brings more about her relationship with her mother how she wanted Rose' approval and acknowledgement from Chapter 1 and the Lineage of their mental issues and genetic behavior from her Brother!! you did well! give yourself some credit.
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siaopaoooo
Mission ko mag recommend ⋌༼ •̀ ⌂ •́ ༽⋋
thus_belladonna
@siaopaoooo parang tulad kina andie (*つ´・∀・)つ Thank youuuu aaaaaaaaaa i appreciate you so much reader kooooo ♡ pahug
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thus_belladonna
@siaopaoooo (///ω///)♪ omg you're gonna recommend me a story or... irecommend yung belladonna?
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thus_belladonna
Hello everyone!
I’ve now revised and updated Tulip’s backstory in Chapter 9 on Belladonna. While the changes might not seem brutal the same as before, I have finally connect her story to her character properly and help fix the plot hole in her character.
I simplified it compared to before, less bizarre, less brutal, becasue I think that clear and proper plotting makes the story stronger.
The previous version was a bit too extreme, I know its a murder mystery and fictional, but I wanted to keep it more realistic in terms of how characters would actually react to events.
Belladonna is still a murder mystery, and violence is part of it, but I aimed for a cleaner, more psychological approach.
The story isn’t just about killing, it’s about the impact these events have on mental health and how trauma shapes a person.
I hope you enjoy it! It may not seem like a massive change, but I think it makes the story feel more grounded and impactful.
—W. Elise <33
thus_belladonna
@Enderend__ i'm glad you're satisfied with that, but I still don't think it was enough, i wrote in RUSH again but it made sense more yes— glad you commented about it being okay since you're one of t the people who comments somth about it (*つ´・∀・)つ
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Enderend__
@thus_belladonna Hi! Elise! I saw and have read the Chapter 09 it is way better and much tolerable. you are right it was not as brutal as it was the last time but it made more sense to the Character of Tulip. I think it brings more about her relationship with her mother how she wanted Rose' approval and acknowledgement from Chapter 1 and the Lineage of their mental issues and genetic behavior from her Brother!! you did well! give yourself some credit.
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Enderend__
W. Elise you are the most unhinged author I ever talked to..
keirriaashake
One more thing… I checked the link to your TikTok here on Wattpad to see what kind of person you are because, wow, how did you manage to write such a masterpiece with such proper plotting? I even went to stalk your reposts to see how you see the world, and yet… you welcome me with… horses? ? ? ? I have a lot of questions for you, Writer Elise, but I can’t help but ask my first one. . .. Horses? ? Why?
keirriaashake
Thank you for completing Belladonna! It was a masterpiece!!! amazing! I’ve seen a lot of comments where you promised to revise it and make some changes, and I honestly cannot wait to see your improvements.
In all honesty, Writer Elise....was it?...you’re already very good! Especially with your sequencing and transitions from plot to plot. You know exactly how to play with chapters to manipulate the reader’s mind while keeping all the pieces together. You’re excellent at plot placement and brilliant at hiding the killer until Arc 2. I fell in love with your characters… so HOW DARE YOU?!
This love-hate relationship I have with you and your story is just proof that it’s a good book. But WE NEED TO TALK ABOUT THE ENDING....just kidding! The ending was great and surprising. I really thought you loved your characters through and through. I want to know more about you as a writer, as an author....what’s going on inside your head, and what kind of person creates a masterpiece like this.
I love how you stayed realistic with how psychopaths behave, and the way you crafted every line of dialogue was pure brilliance. I cannot wait to read Hyacinth and see how the characters are shaped the way they are. TO MORE BOOKS FROM THIS NEWBIE AUTHOR!!
Enderend__
When are you going to post the chapter 1 for Hyacinth?
thus_belladonna
@Enderend__ I don't actually consider myself a writer, but a troll hmmmm (ФωФ) lemme think— nope. Yea nope. Not yet.
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Enderend__
@thus_belladonna Tell me you're a troll before you became a writer aren't you.. ?
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JamesTempest
I shouldnt let Elise follow my tiktok account.
Yes or no
LOL
Enderend__
@JamesTempest "how did you find me i'm pretty sure i didn't press that follow button" THE LAST PART OF THE FINAL CHAPTER IS GETTING MORE AND MORE SUSPICIOUS MISS ELISE EXPLAIN YOURSELF
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JamesTempest
@thus_belladonna lol it's illegal po(im jk) also how did you find me...im curious??? Im pretty sure I didnt press that follow button...
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thus_belladonna
Hello! Just passing by to say hi~
I don’t know if some of you here read manga or watch anime, but if you do, do you happen to know any manga authors around here? I really love the works of Junji Ito and Gege Akutami, they’re THE huge inspirations for my writing.
o( ̄▽ ̄)ブ
Anyways! I just realized that I’m already halfway through ROTN. Once Chapter 11 is out, I’ll start promoting it more.
If you enjoy the comedy–fantasy genre with no romance, Rise Of The Noobs might be the perfect story for you, something light and fun to read when you want to relax or freshen up your mind after a bad day.
Okay~!! That’s all for now. Paipaiiii~
Someone asked me @Tiktok dm who's my favorite character in Belladonna, first it was Tulip, then I fell in love writing Naomi -
— W. Elise
thus_belladonna
@Yatoshu I wouldn't call myself a masochist (///∇///) but more of a— a little bit of someone who loves to read angst or sad stories, i'm too happy in real, i need darkness in my life.
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Yatoshu
of course, and several times in early 2020, i still check on their "active". but no change so far.
Yatoshu
@thus_belladonna @thus_belladonna just go to royal road and find: the-borrowed-aeriums-breeze-first-page. i cannot give link of other platforms. btw, i already follow you back. thanks a lot.
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thus_belladonna
@Yatoshu lets follow eachother! You havent followed me yet, can you send me the link to royal road please (;TДT)
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Yatoshu
@thus_belladonna if you have time, you can visit royal road. it's just about moving to wattpad. i'll tell you right away once i move it.
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