Shaluz77

Author please don't feel offended, but I really needed to say this. 
          I really love the story line but in every chapter there a like a lot of sentences that I don't understand. Because of those complicated sentences it is really difficult to enjoy the story. It may be also because of  the Chinese context. 
          I really wish you rather than copying word to word from the original story, you would have written the sentences own your own. 
          If you have used your own way to write the story, the story would have been way much better. 
          I also need to know whethee Tae is boy or girl because you have used brother-in-law for Tae at the same time you have been using she/her for Tae. 
          Maybe the real story character of Tae is a female that's why I said rather than copying please change the sentences and proofread before publishing the story. 
          
          I know you must have feel bad, but I really wantedto express my thoughts while reading the story. 
          Once again sorry If I really offended you.

thv_ficz_7

@Shalu0077 No as a reader you have right to tell me what's wrong what's not so , I am not offend and about story, I already said the story has more than 1000 chapter so it's kinda difficult for me to write but I will try to write so that it will be less difficult for u alll . And about tae he is FE( male)  so sometimes I used she/her and brother-in-law.. but I will try to do best... Thanks for message..❤️
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