tia_wolf424

Hi I am in fact not deceased - it's been a long time - I likely won't be posting any stories anymore but I am trying to get one up and written - motivation is not as high as it was when I was 12 lol - I will be trying but full honesty I don't have much belief lmfao 

tia_wolf424

Hi I am in fact not deceased - it's been a long time - I likely won't be posting any stories anymore but I am trying to get one up and written - motivation is not as high as it was when I was 12 lol - I will be trying but full honesty I don't have much belief lmfao 

tia_wolf424

Sooo... I haven't been writing at all owo buttt i will now I have time lately and I have a hundred thousand ideas for my books

DrkyDoodles

Story of my life friend story of my life lol
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tia_wolf424

Soooo, I'm back to being active on here, for now anyway...
          As you can see I've cleared every message on here since September of last year  
          I was on sort of a looooong break from here that lasted about 2 or 3 months with me checking in and writing maybe a few sentences in my books.
          But anyway I'm back and I'm gonna attempt to stay back. 
          As you may or may not have noticed I sorta refreshed my account with a cleared message tab (which I just spoke of) and a new about. 
          I have nothing else to say so I guess I'm going to get back to writing. ^w^ 

tia_wolf424

Iconic duo? Ok https://dowerapport.com/r.html?l=tEGjbth which iconic duo am I and who ever answers this? XD

trouts59

@tia_wolf424 friends 1994-2004
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tia_wolf424

@tiawolfandfriends lmao neither have i maybe we should XD
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BatgirlGeek

@tiawolfandfriends It said that you would be Phoebe and I’d be Rachel from FRIENDS.
            
            I’ve never watched that show in my life lmao
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folashewaodekunle

Thanks alot for the follow ❤️
          And you can also check out my stories
          You might love them

tia_wolf424

@folashewaodekunle This is a little predictable but it makes more sense. Why would Marcus just start thinking about breaking up with his rich pretty girlfriend without a reason and what is Betty gaining by beating up Anne in front of him? It would be smarter to harass Anne in secret where the school cameras can't see like a stairway. Also Anne should have a friend who strongly suggests that Anne should tell someone about Betty harassing her. That'll bring in logic and story line therefore bringing in more readers and also your description should tell more about what the book is about. If you want we can message each other and I can give you tips for your story's. I think if you keep practicing your stories will rise to the top ^-^ i had to make 3 replies sorry.
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tia_wolf424

@folashewaodekunle And Betty shouldn't just start beating up Anne all of a sudden in front of her boyfriend. How about this:
            
            Betty and clique of girls stroll down the hall as Marcus is helping Anne with her books. She glares at the girl. Her and her squad walk up to Marcus and Anne. " Hey babe.", Betty says with a smile. " Hi Betty...", Marcus replies. "What are you doing with this poor girl?" , Betty asks and glares at Anne. "Betty just shut up ok. What's your problem? " , Marcus asks his girlfriend angrily . Anne just stares at her feet not wanting to direct unwanted attention to herself. "Me? I don't have a problem. YOU do if you think you can speak to me like that." , Betty says outraged. "You know what we're through. I'm DONE with you being such a jerk to everyone. Let's get out of here Anne." , Marcus says angrily and walks off with Anne following right behind him. Betty glares at them as they walk off.
            
            Later
            
            Anne runs down the stairs as the bell rings where Betty and her clique are waiting for her. Betty sticks out her leg as Anne goes down the stairs. Anne trips and falls. Betty and her clique laugh at her while she lays crying on the ground. "That'll teach you not to mess with my boyfriend." , Betty says still laughing. She and her friends walk off. "Oh and if you even think about telling Marcus about this Gutter Girl I'll come after you haha." , Betty says stopping before walking through the door and off to class. 
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tia_wolf424

@folashewaodekunle i think New Girl At School is good but there are a few issues I think I should point out: the grammar isn't great it definitely needs work and there isn't much of a story line. I feel like there should be a little more like, character descriptions, and maybe a character or a narrator point of view for example:
            
                In the class room of ___ High school Marcus is talking to his friend. Marcus is the __ of the school, he has (messy, neat, beautiful) __ colored hair and __ eyes. He's wearing a __ colored shirt and ___ jeans. His friend (similar description). "Hey who was that new girl in class?" , Marcus asks (action: getting up from his chair, leaning on his desk, exc.). " Anne I think. Why'd you ask?", His friend replies (action). 
             
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