Shaka

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being that I do enjoy reading I also like for them to be completed so once they're done I will be more than happy to read them

Hey yall, I've been getting comments FINALLY!!!!!!!!!!
          Careful what you wish for ;) LOL
          And I'm taking them to heart.
          The common one is that my writing style can get confusing. Like when the characters are speaking, and when they are thinking. Just generally I'm using the apostrophes to emphasize when characters are thinking. Which I suppose could be way confusing when i'm starting from 3rd person narration to then complete the sentence as a characters thought. It's a certain style I want to perfect in stead of just dropping cuz no one else is doing this. Work with me pretty pretty please. 
          
          So also if you have the time, I am looking for what Wattpad readers affectionately (not so much) refers to as grammar Nazi's. I can take it, and I know I have a lot of work to do while on my journey to where I want my writing to be. So please maybe consider shooting me the specific paragraph/sentence that makes NO sense. You could even go further by writing how you think I should have written it.
          So antyway, for the few that are sticking thru this story with me I LOVE YOU!! And hold onto your seat cuz I'm taking you for a ride out of the usual urban lit, to a few other genre's starting NOW!